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2005年有12篇文章从25万多份作文卷中脱颖而出，成为优卷。所谓优卷作文，指的是至少要在68分以上(满分70分)的作文。据评卷老师介绍，优卷作文是这样产生的，每一份作文卷至少要经过两个评卷老师之手，如果两个老师的评分差距在7分内，那么取平均分为最后成绩，否则再让第三个老师来评分，后取相近的两个分数(差距也必须在7分内)的平均分。最后的平均分如果在68分以上的，就要提交到作文评卷大组进行最后审定，大组的老师由福建师大的教授以及高考作文命题组老师组成。 福建地区高考作文题：两幅图：一幅是标准的圆形，周长小，面积大，比较稳定。一幅是带有棱角的圆形，周长大，面积小，比较多变。根据这两幅图自拟题目的话题作文。

In 2005, 12 articles stand out from more than 250000 Composition Papers and become excellent ones. The so-called excellent composition refers to the composition with a score of at least 68 (full score of 70). According to the teacher's introduction, excellent composition is produced in this way. Each composition paper must go through the hands of at least two teachers. If the score difference between the two teachers is within 7 points, the average score will be taken as the final score, otherwise the third teacher will score, and then the average score of the two similar scores (the difference must be within 7 points) will be taken. If the final average score is more than 68, it will be submitted to the composition assessment group for final examination. The teachers in the group are composed of the professors of Fujian Normal University and the teachers of the composition proposition group of the college entrance examination. Two pictures: one is a standard circle with small circumference, large area and relatively stable. One is a circle with edges and corners. It grows in circumference, has a small area and is relatively changeable. According to these two pictures, I made up the topic composition of the topic.

跳出枷锁创造风格

Out of the shackles to create style

为什么服装设计师总要千方百计地设计一套又一套的时装？为什么我们的祖国在前进的号角中总夹杂着这样一句话――提倡科技创新？为什么一座座拔地高起的高楼不沿用20世纪五六十年代建筑的风格？一切的一切，只因为时代在变化，人的思想也在变化。时装要迎合时代潮流，发展要与时俱进，生活赋予了我们创新的动力。

Why do fashion designers always try their best to design one set of fashion after another? Why is our motherland always mixed with such a sentence in the clarion call of advancing - advocating scientific and technological innovation? Why don't the tall buildings which are standing on the ground follow the architectural style of 1950s and 1960s? All things, only because the times are changing, people's thinking is also changing. Fashion should meet the trend of the times, development should keep pace with the times, and life has given us the power of innovation.

跳出圆圈的枷锁，创造新颖的风格，这是一个充满智慧的选择。

It is a wise choice to jump out of the shackles of circle and create a new style.

今天接过试卷，我不由的在心中赞叹――这是语文考试的一大革新！没有了平日里框架式的出题方式。取而代之的是更能体现水平的试题结构，我不敢说规范化的试题有何弊端，但我可以说，创新需要勇气，它不仅是在选拔人才，更是在引领中国文学走向风格化，这是一个成功的前奏！

Today I took the test paper, I can't help but admire it in my heart - this is a great innovation of Chinese test! There is no usual way of framing questions. Instead, it is a test structure that can better reflect the level. I can't say what's wrong with the standardized test, but I can say that innovation needs courage. It is not only to select talents, but also to lead Chinese literature towards stylization, which is a successful Prelude!

我们在适应别人的创新，而为何我们不尝试着跳出枷锁呢？

We are adapting to other people's innovation, and why don't we try to get out of the shackles?

当你看到身边的交通警示牌上写着“小心慢行”，而美国的交通警示牌上却写着“如果想让你的车子游泳，请照直开”的时候，你是否感受到了风格的魅力。“小心慢行”一句极其规范化的话，或许只会让人不屑一顾；而创新的产物却不一样，它在给人幽默感的同时，深深地印在了每一位驾驶员的心中。一成不变的事物，有时并不能达到理想的目的，而带上风格的创新，哪怕只有一点点，也许会让人拥有喜出望外的收获。这就是新生事物旺盛生命力的写照。

Do you feel the charm of style when you see that the traffic warning sign beside you says "be careful and slow", while the traffic warning sign in the United States says "if you want your car to swim, please drive straight". "Be careful and walk slowly" is an extremely standardized sentence, which may only be ignored by people; however, the products of innovation are not the same. It gives people a sense of humor and is deeply impressed in the hearts of every driver. Constant things, sometimes can not achieve the ideal goal, and with style innovation, even if only a little, may let people have a surprising harvest. This is a picture of the exuberant vitality of new things.

也许你要说，被圆圈套住的事物有章可循，它更稳定；可是别忘了，跳出枷锁，创造风格，永远领先于被规范化的条条框框，因为它被注入了一种鲜活的思想――创新。

You may say that there are rules to follow for things trapped by circles, which are more stable; but don't forget to jump out of the shackles and create styles, which are always ahead of the standardized rules and regulations, because it is infused with a fresh thought innovation.

贝多芬说过，一个卓越的人的一大优点，就是在陈旧与新颖之间果敢地选择了新颖。

Beethoven said that one of the great advantages of an excellent man is that he boldly chooses the novel between the old and the new.

面对同样一颗石头，许多雕塑家都说它是一个不属于艺术的顽石，可是罗丹以他特有的眼光识慧于这颗石头，并把它雕成著名的大卫像。正像其他雕塑家所言：这颗石头上的纹路与艺术相悖离，可是为何罗丹却不这么认为呢？因为他走了一条不常规的路。他用自己的技艺，避开石头固有的纹路，创造了雕塑界的一大“奇观”。

Facing the same stone, many sculptors say that it is a hard stone that does not belong to art. However, Rodin recognized the stone with his unique vision and carved it into the famous image of David. As other sculptors have said, the grain on this stone is contrary to art, but why doesn't Rodin think so? Because he took an unusual road. He used his own skills to avoid the inherent lines of stone and created a "wonder" in the sculpture world.

是什么东西如此出类拔萃，是什么东西敢于走出枷锁，实现完美？是创新，是一种与众不同的风格，是它们在向“规范”挑战，是它们为敢于创新的人蓄积了胜利的呐喊。

What is so outstanding, what dare to get out of the shackles and achieve perfection? It's innovation. It's a unique style. It's a challenge to "norms". It's a call for victory for those who dare to innovate.

规范化的城市、街道，规范化的工作、学习，规范化的生活、娱乐，是否已经让你厌倦了？没关系，只要你带上在规范的圈子里所学的知识，用勇气武装自己，带上一颗年轻朝气的心，坚定地跳出这一束缚思维的条框，你就会看到创新在向你招手，它会带领你走向生命的另一个极致！

Are you tired of standardized cities and streets, standardized work and study, standardized life and entertainment? It doesn't matter, as long as you take the knowledge learned in the standard circle, arm yourself with courage, take a young and energetic heart, and firmly jump out of the box of this fettered thinking, you will see that innovation beckons to you, and it will lead you to another extreme of life!

自信一点，跳出枷锁，创造风格吧！看吧，前方的鲜花在为你歌唱，因为你是明智的！

Be confident, jump out of the shackles and create a style! Look, the flowers ahead are singing for you, because you are wise!