雅思写作中常见的语法错误

雅思写作破6分魔咒 语法不犯错是关键一文告诉我们在雅思写作中想要冲破6分的话，一个关键点在于用词用句正确，没有语法错误。下面小编就和大家分享雅思写作破6语法不犯错是关键，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

雅思写作破6语法不犯错是关键

写作6分首先要求不能跑题。一旦跑题，可能5分都非常难，4.5分是经常见到的分数。其次，保证论点的论证能满足基本的逻辑，论证要充分。最后，不能出现太多的语法错误，确保句子的准确性。下边，给大家列一列考生作文中的常见语法错误及犯错的原因。

1. The quantity of women workers keep stable from 1985 to 1990.

这个句子是小作文数据图中学生所写。此句明显有两个错误，一个是时态错误。小作文中如果数据是过去的，要采用一般过去时，所以此处要用kept.。第二个是动词 keep形式不对，这句话的主语是quantity。时态错误和主谓不一致是雅思考试写作和口语最常见的语法错误。

2. With developing of economy， the environment had deteriorated.

这里用了一个with 介词+名词短语，想表达伴随的概念。但是大家要牢记介词后边可以加名词、名词短语、动名词，构成介词短语以便做状语或者定语。但是developing of economy词性有问题。A of B是常见的表示所属的名词短语格式，翻译成B的 A, 这里要求 A和B必须都是名词。而developing 是形容词性质，所以应该改为 with the development of economy.。同样，我们还可以把with替换成as, 但是值得注意的是as 是连词，连词后边要加句子，所以可以写成as the economy develops。

3. Playing computer games waste parents’ hard-earned money.

这句话是经典的主谓不一致的错误。主句是playing computer games 动名词做主语，所以谓语动词要用单数加s。在写一个现在时的句子时，一定要注意主谓一致问题。主语是否是可数名词单数、不可数名词、动名词、不定式或是句子。如果是，并且句子中又没有使用情态动词，谓语动词要加s。

4. There are many people believe studying abroad is a good choice.

这句话之所以这样写，都是受汉语语意的影响。那“有”在英文中我们用there be/ have 都是动词概念，所以造成句子多谓语动词，这里的are/ believe/ is都是动词，但是句子believe 后边是个宾语从句，明显动词多了。

5. Government should take immediate measures to protect our environment.

可数名词不能单独使用。这里government 是可数名词，所以在句子中要么用governments, 要么特指the government。

6. University students receive training on job-related skills is necessary.

又是一句读起来朗朗上口，受汉语语意影响的句子。这个句子中有 receive 和 is 两个动词，但是没有涉及到从句。university students receive training on job-related skills 已经是个完整的句子，所以要用形式主语从句 it is necessary that university students receive training on job-related skills.

7. The number of female students in this university is higher than male students.

比较成份要一致。这句前边主语是the number， 后边比较对象是male students，所以正确的方式是 The number of female students in this university is higher than the number of male students. 或者The number of female students in this university is higher than that of male students.

8. Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but to the government’s decision.

Both ...and/ not only…but also/ A and B都属于并列结构，前后连接成份要一致。这句not only 后边是动词短语，but后确是 to the government’s decision。所以我们可以改成Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but affect the government’s decision。

9. Although teenagers may be included in family decisions, but they are not ultimately responsible.

这个句子的错误在雅思口语中经常见到，也是受汉语语意影响，但是在英语中although和but都是连词，在句子中只能有一个。同样because和so也是一个道理。

10. Which kinds of knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years.

语序错误。主语从句，宾语从句都可以用疑问词what/which/ whether 等引导，但一定要记住，后边加正常语序的句子。should universities provide 语序错误，应该是which kinds of knowledge and skills universities should provide has been argued for many years，是which kinds of 引导的主语从句。

这十个雅思句子语法错误都是在教学中发现的比较低级和常见的错误，其实，雅思口语和写作可以使用简单句式，但是一定要确保句子准确，这样才能提高分数实现突破。

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood.

Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?

Model Answer:

I live in a small community. From my everyday experience and observation I can say that the idea about building a new theatre in my neighborhood has some advantages as well as disadvantages. In this essay I will first focus on the reasons why I support this idea and then move on to analyzing why I oppose it.

First of all, I like movies and my husband and I sometimes go to the movie theatre to watch premieres. Unfortunately, it is time-consuming for us. We have to drive about 50 minutes to the nearest movies theatre. So, the idea of having a movie theatre in our neighborhood seems very attractive. It would save us an hour just to get there and another hour to get back home. Another important aspect of it is that in this case we will be able to get to the movie theatre by foot. I must to confess that we always have parking troubles in the parking space near the movie theatre.

Second of all, new movie theatre is a very good place for students who want to earn some money. My husband and I live near a student community, so I think it would be a great news for them. In addition to this practical benefit students will be able to watch all movies free of charge. I suppose it is a great way to save some money.

Finally, there are usually many restaurants and entertaining centers around a movie theatre. There people can have dinner or play game machines.

In contrast, I think that the building of a new movie theatre will destroy the silence and beauty of out community. Such entertaining centers are often noisy. Moreover, traffic jams will probably be the result of it.

In conclusion, I think that if the question was about building a new movie theatre in the next neighborhood I would completely agree.

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Model Answer 1:

I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I believe that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.

For several reasons, I think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. First of all, factories often bring pollution. They are prone to contaminating the local air and water. Second of all, factories make noise. Another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. As a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. So, all these obviously will not make one's life happier and healthier in my community.

From the other side, I believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. First of all, it will bring new job opportunities. Many specialists will be required to work there. Second of all, I think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. So, some old pipes may be changed. Another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.

However, I do not think that listed above benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. From my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people's health.

Model Answer 2:

New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.

Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To

accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.

I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.

A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.