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中考英语写作精彩点评与修改(二)

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  看图作文就是让大家借助于图片和内容提示,通过细致的观察和联想进行写作。

  [中考真题]2005年山西省(实验区)试题"书面表达":

  观察以下四幅图画写一篇短文。要求:意思完整;语言规范;50-60词。

  [写作指导]写作步骤如下:

  1. 读图。

  即分析图画所提供的信息,充分发挥自己的想象力,正确理解图中内容的确切含义。如图1所示:父母亲和"我"去公园。图2:在公园里划船。图3:"我"抓鱼时不慎掉入水中。图4:母亲跳出水中把"我"救起。

  2. 试写。

  即根据图中情景及汉语提示来表达文章内容,充分发挥自己的实际水平,避难就易,一法不成,另找它途。如图1所示:My parents and I went to the park. 图2:We went boating on the lake. 图3:i was catching the fish when I fell into the water. 图4:My mother jumped into the water and saved me.

  3. 扩写。

  即适当增加情节和过渡性词语,把上述句子连贯起来。这里的扩写并不是毫无根据地简单地通过想象把试写内容拉长,而是紧紧围绕图片中心把试写内容进行扩充。使内容更丰富、人物活动更形象、事情过程更具体,因而增强文章的感染力。力争做到合理想象,用词得当,句子结构及语法运用正确,条理清楚。

  [参考例文]

  last Sunday,my parents and i went to the park. We went boating on the water. There were some beautiful fish in the water. I couldn't help catching them. suddenly,I fell into the water. I was so frightened that I cried loudly. My mother jumped into the water at once and lifted me out of the water. I was saved. how dangerous the trip was!

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