中考英语写作精彩点评与修改（一）

　　常用句型/词汇

　　There is/are …

　　It lies (in) …

　　above Above my desk, there is a frame of picture.

　　across from There is a big hospital across from the river.

　　under/below Under the bridge, there is a dog barking.

　　before

　　in front of; in the front of in the front of the bus

　　beyond

　　further

　　down

　　around

　　nearby

　　next to Next to the hill, there is a little running river.

　　close to

　　on the left/right On the right of the tree, there is a bench.

　　opposite to

　　on the top of There is a box on the top of the bench

　　beneath

　　记叙文

　　中考英语作文模板

　　第一部分:简单明确交代 when; who; where

　　第二部分:详细流畅的叙述事情"起因""经过""结果"

　　第三部分:事情经历留下的感受或对其的看法。(I will never forget the day in my life.)

　　中考英语作文范文

　　Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the South River the next day.

　　On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket. My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes. As soon as we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank. Some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.

　　After we finished our work, were tired. But we all felt happy to see the young trees we had planted on the river bank.

　　时态一致; 记叙文一般用"过去时",叙述当时正在发生的用"过去进行时"

　　记叙文常用词汇及句型

　　in the morning

　　at noon

　　in the afternoon

　　in the evening

　　at night

　　at 3 o'clock

　　at first

　　then; and then

　　soon

　　at the same time

　　I was watching TV, in the meantime/at the same time she is washing clothes.

　　first; second; third

　　after

　　before

　　later

　　afterwards

　　at last

　　finally

　　presently

　　2. 信件的结构格和式

　　信件包含的5个部分

　　1.Heading 信头 发件人地址→ Class 11 junior 2

　　排列顺序:由小到大 Rendafuzhong Middle School

　　Haidian District

　　Beijing, 100081

　　China

　　Sept. 19, 2006

　　Newsweek International

　　323 Madison Avenue ← 收件人地址

　　New York, NY 10022

　　U.S.A

　　Dear Mr. Lee: ← 2.称呼语

　　………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

　　………………………………………………… ← 3.正文

　　4. 结束语 → Yours ever

　　5. 签 名 → Wang Wei

　　描写文-----形容词

　　记叙文-----动词

　　have a swim(go swimming)

　　have dances(go dancing)

　　have a picnic

　　go to cinema

　　have a party

　　hold a sports meeting

　　go for an outing

　　see the sights of …

　　play chess with sb.

　　help sb. do sth

　　enjoy sth

　　I feel bored

　　allow sb. to do sth

　　keep sb. from do sth

　　call on sb. to do sth

　　offer to do sth

　　refuse to do sth

　　agree to do sth

　　regret to do sth

　　happen to do sth

　　be woken up

　　do sth as usual

　　set about doing sth

　　try one's best to do sth

　　take/send sb. to someplace

　　I'm trying to find sth

　　I can't help doing sth

　　Some people are doing A., others are doing B., still others are doing C..

　　议论文

　　鲜明的论点

　　中考英语作文模板:

　　第一部分: 引论 (阐明论点)

　　第二部分: 本论 (阐明分论点,以论据支持)

　　第三部分: 结论

　　逻辑顺序 表结构顺序的词

　　First; at first; secondly; at second; thirdly; the fourth

　　on one hand; on the other hand;

　　next;

　　finally;

　　At last;

　　as a result;

　　consequently;

　　for example;

　　for incidence;

　　in addition;

　　in this case;

　　in a word;

　　in conclusion

　　in summary

　　because

　　so

　　but

　　therefore

　　however

　　表达精确;条理清晰

　　中考英语作文范文

　　The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollutions I'm worrying about. First of all, water pollution and air pollution are the most serious because people can't live healthily with polluted water and air. In fact, more and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

　　I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better walk or ride bikes instead of taking cars because more cares mean more waste gas. In a word, we should make our world more and more beautiful.

　　应用文

　　信件

　　中考英语作文模板信封

　　邮票

　　发信人地址

　　收信人姓名

　　收信人地址

　　发件人地址→ Class 2 grade 3rd

　　排列顺序:由小到大 Rendafuzhong Middle School

　　Haidian District

　　Beijing, 100081

　　China

　　Sept. 19, 2006

　　Newsweek International

　　323 Madison Avenue ← 收件人地址

　　New York, NY 10022

　　U.S.A

　　Dear Alex: ← 称呼语

　　………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

　　………………………………………………… ← 正文

　　结束语 → Yours ever

　　签 名 → Wang Wei

　　信首:

　　Thank you for your card.

　　Thank you for writing to me.

　　Your letter came into my hand yesterday/several days ago.

　　It's a long time since I got your last letter.

　　I often think about you. How have you been recently?

　　How are you recently?

　　How is everything?

　　How are you getting along? I miss you very much.

　　……

　　信尾

　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Please say hello to your family.

　　Write back as soon as you can.

　　Happy Teachers' Day!

　　With my best wishes

　　With many thanks.

　　All the best!

　　Good luck!

　　May you succeed!

　　结束语:

　　平辈:Yours; yours sincerely; sincerely yours;

　　长辈:Yours respectfully; respectfully yours

　　Yours faithfully; Faithfully yours

　　Yours truly

　　电子邮件:

　　From: yanghui@hotmail.com

　　To: alex@yahoo.com

　　Subject:

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　日记

　　中考英语作文范文:

　　May 6, Monday cloudy

　　……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

　　It was a bright September afternoon.

　　A north wind is whistling.

　　There is a threat of rain.

　　Fine; sunny; clear; cloudy; windy; rainy; snowy; frosty; stormy

　　Clear later cloudy

　　通知

　　Notice

　　Students and teachers of Grade 3:

　　………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

　　The headmaster office

　　Dec. 29, 2006

　　应用文高分要诀:1. 正确的格式 2. 完整包含提示信息

　　好词好句

　　Make good use of 充分利用 opportunity 机会 quality 素质

　　individuality 个性 teenager 青少年 trust 信任

　　perfect 完美的 firmly 坚定的 society 社会

　　tradition 传统 firecrackers 爆竹 environment 环境

　　on the opposite 相反 defeat 失败 arrange 安排

　　honor 荣誉 enjoy oneself 某人玩得开心 rush 冲,奔

　　surprise 惊奇 puzzle 迷惑 fever 高烧

　　repeat 重复 by and by 不久 effort 努力

　　as soon as 尽快

　　at home/ at a street corner在家/在街道的拐角处

　　on the road/ on the street/ on one's way to / on the boat/ on the playground 在路上/在街上/在某地的路上/在穿上/

　　by the table/ the lake/river 在桌边/在湖边/在河边

　　in the park 在公园里

　　look after/take care of 照顾

　　be busy doing sth 忙于干。。。

　　be angry with sb. 生某人的气。。。

　　give sb. a call/ ring sb. up 打电话给某人 hear from 收到某人的信

　　mid-term exam 期中考试 final examination 期末考试

　　take…for granted 视…为理所应当

　　fall behind/catch up with 落后/跟上

　　A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情

　　The happiness will come when the pain leaves. 苦尽甘来

　　The winter is coming and the spring is not far 冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?

　　As long as we work hard, we can make the impossible possible 只要我们努力,就能变不可能为可能。

　　Set sb. an example 给某人树立榜样

　　It's easy/hard to do sth. 干。。。

　　。。。

　　Practice makes perfect!