gre写作的范文要怎么用

为拿到gre考试好成绩，同学们一定会认真复习。不过，据了解，有些陷阱极容易被gre备考生们忽略。今天小编就和大家分享gre写作的丢分点,希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

gre写作的丢分点

1. gre写作丢分点之论证不足

gre考试写作Argument即驳论文，需要对题干进行全面的审查，找到原文中论述的一些逻辑漏洞加以攻击。查找漏洞，提出论点，阐述论证确立自己的观点的过程就叫做论证。换句话说，论证就是用一个或一些已知为真的判断确定另一个判断的真实性的思维过程。所谓论证过程，就是用严格的逻辑规则由论据得出论点的过程。所以，如果论点的得出过程理由不够充分，或论点总结不够准确，这篇文章的论证过程就是不严谨的。

gre写作虽然主要是针对逻辑错误进行攻击和论证，但只是理论上的论述会显得文章死板，不易理解，适当的举例会让论证显得更加具有说服力，同时也能丰富文章内容，提升文章的可读性。

2. gre写作丢分点之缺少论据

gre写作要求考生论证充分，论据有力，考生基本上都能够针对找出的逻辑错误进行充分论证，但是缺少例子和细节，文章说理就会显得十分苍白无力，所以gre写作分数不高，也有可能是这份不造成的。

论据就是为论点提供的证据，通过论据，可以加深论点的准确性，使论点更加准确，更加能够让人信服。所以考生要在文章中尽量做到细节的丰富和量化，很多时候细致的例子能够弥补遣词造句上的不足。具体应做到以下几点：

1)论据要来源于生活，要具有生动的论述效果。不能过于空洞，也不能脱离现时，否则就失去了举例的意义。

2)要客观表达。虽然来源于身边社会，但不能主观臆断。

3) gre写作中举例常见的表达方式如for example,/for instance, (后加句子)Such as/ like (后加词组)，Take... as an example, A case in point is that...等。

3. gre写作丢分点之逻辑混乱

考生在进行gre写作之前，一定要先把题干弄明白，准确找出题干中的逻辑错误，然后再进行下一步的写作，这对于把握gre写作的文章内容和逻辑思维非常重要。考生需要审好题，审清题在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败，绝不可以掉以轻心。不仅要仔细研究题目，还要结合gre写作常见的逻辑七宗罪进行仔细分析。首先要明确文章要写的内容，这是保证整篇文章切题的关键;其次，确定文章所需的主语人称，人称混乱是中国考生常犯的一个错误;第三，注意文章对动词的时态、语气的特殊要求。

gre写作更注重的是文章的整体感觉，从备考指导中的高分作文范例可以看出，即使整个论述只有1条主线，只要前后联接得自然流畅，并能一步一步引导读者向结论靠近，就是好文章。增强gre写作的逻辑性考生可以从以下几个方面入手：

1) 掌控题目中的逻辑链。这是gre写作的根本，也是前提。

2)根据逻辑漏洞的个数列出文章的主要提纲。这样既能体现出文章结构的清晰，又能在内容上体现出详略得当，顺序合理。

3)根据所列提纲进行逻辑论证时重中之重。

缺乏论点，逻辑混乱，缺乏证据，是gre写作的常见丢分点。

GRE作文范文：Reclaiming Our Roots

Some cultures are more rooted to the earth and connected to their inherent spirituality. But every one of us, even those of us who have been disconnected from our roots for hundreds of years, comes from a place that was once inhabited by people who worshipped and honored the earth on which they lived. In other words, we can all claim this wisdom as an essential part of who we are.

One way we can begin to rediscover our roots is to explore the early earth-based religions practiced in the parts of the world that birthed our ancestors. If we explore the ancient spiritual practices of our ancestors, we will find that their practices and beliefs share many elements with Native American, African, and aboriginal religious traditions. People who are connected to the earth and honor her share a fundamental philosophy that we can claim as our own because we too are of the earth. Many of us have become so disconnected from the earth that it feels foreign and awkward to imagine communing with her or performing a ritual for her. If we are honest, though, we will find within ourselves a yearning to feel more connected, more grounded, and more at home in this world. This yearning can lead us back to our disowned roots, which, of course, leads us right into the heart of the earth.

As we begin to see more clearly the people we come from, we can begin to alter our perception of who we are now, laying claim to our inherent relatedness to the earth. We might celebrate this by observing the ancient calendar of solstices and equinoxes, celebrating and honoring the cycle of the seasons as our ancestors did, or we might explore any one of the many earth-based practices through reading or participating in ritual. When we do these things, we tap back into our roots, finding nourishment at the wellspring of our earthly origins, the source we share with all of humanity.

GRE作文范文：Consciously Reconnecting

There may be times when we feel like our connection to the universe is closed. Maybe things don’t seem to be going well in our day, or our lives, or we may feel out of our element. The truth is, the universe is always there for us. We know that we create our experience with our thoughts, and this is another way we need to make a conscious decision about how we want to experience life. It is up to us to do the work of making the connection, because nobody can do it for us, though sometimes the universe may send us wake-up calls.

You can think of it as getting some fresh air. We are always breathing and the air is always around us, surrounding us, moving through us. But we may need to step outside of where we are in the moment—physically, mentally, or emotionally—and make the conscious choice to take a deep breath in order to feel the air coming in and going out. Whether this means stepping outside physically or merely shifting our thoughts, it is only our perception that changes; the air remains the same.

It is just as easy to reconnect with the universe. Using the same technique as a breath of fresh air, a deep breath can bring us back to our center. As we inhale, we fill our bodies with the oxygen needed to replenish our most basic physical needs, allowing the air to circulate within us. Exhaling, we release the stale, the used, the potentially toxic air, removing any blocks that may keep us from going deeper into the stillness that lies at our center where we connect to the universe. Feeling closed off does not need to be a negative experience. When we become conscious of it, we can think of the wholeness of a closed circuit, which allows electricity to connect and flow properly. Our bodies work the same way, and when we make that connection in our minds, it can help bring us back to the connection we seek.