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雅思作文高分句型

高分句型1 In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, people's second thought is to...

(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)

1 根据上面提到的 A的负面因素/不利因素/缺陷，人们另一个想法是…

例：根据上面提到的提高产量的负面因素，我们的另一个想法是提高产品质量。

高分句型2 To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...

(e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)

2 为了对抗/抵消/取消A的不良/负面影响/结果，B被提出作为对…的另一个更好的做法/解决办法。

例：为了对抗管理僵化的不良影响，感情投资被提出作为商业成功的另一个更好的做法。

高分句型3 In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A has brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution/course to...namely...

(e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)

3 然而，人们努力对抗A所带来的负面/不和谐因素，提出了另一个方法/解决办法/做法…即… 例：为了努力消除考试教育带来的不良的一面，教育工作者对这一问题提出了另一途径，即素质教育。

高分句型4 In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/toward the solution for the problem of...

(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.)

4 与A的缺点相比，B对解决…的问题在正确的方向上更进了一步。 例：与核电的缺点相比，太阳能可作为更好的办法来解决能源问题。

高分句型5 So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.

(e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)

5 当谈到对A的问题/局限/错误/弱点的有效补救/平衡，人们自然就想到了B。

例：因此当谈到竞争的坏处的有效补救时，人们自然就想到了合作。

高分句型6 But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage/weakness that...

6 但它也同时带来了…的负面效应/不利因素/弱点。

高分句型7 However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example...

7 然而并非没有限制/问题/瑕疵/缺点，例如…

高分句型8 Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...

8 如同其他任何事物一样，它也有不好的一面，…就是明证。

高分句型9 For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.

9 尽管A具有优势/好处/正面效应，它却有一些坏处/危害/负面效应。

高分句型10 To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.

10 然而为了能达到这一目标，我们仍有很多工作要做/很多障碍要消除。

雅思小作文常见类型解析

小作文一般都是图表作文，常见的几种主要类型有：表格图，曲线图，柱状图，饼状图和图画题五大类。一般来说，柱图和线图是每月常考的题型，有时候会有连考或者交替考的趋势。

饼图和表格题也是相对频率较高的题型。偶尔也会考综合题。图画题主要分为流程图和地图题，一般每季度轮换题库的时候会出现。不管考到哪种题型，其要求都是一致的，先要挑选重要数值并且在相关处作比较。

在雅思A类小作文图表题的写作当中，考生经常会碰到图表看懂了，但因数据比较凌乱，找不出很明显的特征，或者找到了很多特征，却不知道应该用什么样的思路来把图表当中的重要信息和规律特征有机自然的联系贯穿起来的情况。专家将从动态图表和静态图表的角度来详细分析小作文的解题思路。

一、动态图

有时间推移变化的图我们通常叫做动态图。曲线图都是动态图，但是对于表格图，饼图和柱图却有动态和静态之分。对于大多数的动态图我们都可以大致当作线图来处理。动态图重点在数字变化的表达上，利用主语句型的不同和衔接关联词来展开。写好动态图的基础是要准备好三个方面：

1. 解题思路

1). 表格题的动态题解题思路大致可以分为四步：①先相减(年份大的减小的);②后分类(上升一类，下降一类);③挑出极值(最大值);④挑选数值(倍数关系，变化明显的数值);

2). 线图的解题思路大致分为两种：第一种：①按整条线来写(可以把相同趋势的线放在一起，也可把相反趋势的线拿来做对比);②挑选重要信息(整体趋势，起点，重点，最高点，最低点);③整体作比较。第二种：①按时间区间来写(横轴对上去有共同拐点或交点的分为一段);②对比着写(强调交点，拐点，最高点，最低点);

3). 动态柱图解题思路：把各个柱子的顶点连起来就是几条线，所以按线图方式处理;

4). 动态饼图解题思路：把每种颜色看做一条线，可把相同相反的颜色放在一起写，很多时候也可以把占的比例最大的单独写一部分。

2. 基础替换词汇

1). 趋势词汇

上升动词类：increase, rise, grow, jump, surge, shoot up, soar

下降动词类：decrease, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip

波动动词类：fluctuate

持平动词类：remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant

修饰动词的副词：slightly 轻微地，slowly 缓慢地，gradually 逐渐地，steadily 稳定地，rapidly 迅速地，moderately 温和地，轻微地，significantly 明显地，sharply 明显地，dramatically 急剧地，drastically 急剧地

上升名词类：increase, rise, growth, jump, surge

下降名词类：decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop

波动名词类：fluctuation

修饰名词的形容词：slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic

2). 极值类词汇和表达

最高点：reach the peak/top/highest point

Increase to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)

最低点：reach the bottom/lowest point

drop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)

占了：occupy/make up/take up/account for/represent/constitute

3). 倍数的表达方式

Double 是两倍/大一倍

Increase/decrease three times 增长/减少了三倍

4). 大约的表达方式

Approximately/About/around+数字

3. 常用的小作文的趋势句式表达

句式一：变化主体/图画中主体+趋势动词+副词+数值+时间区间

Eg: The number of aged people over 65 increased significantly from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2 million in 2000.

句式二：There be+形容词+表示趋势的名词+in+变化的主体+时间区间

Eg: There was a significant increase in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2million in 2000.

句式三：时间+see/experience/witness+ 表示趋势的名词+in+ 变化的主体+ 数值

Eg: The period from 1940 to 2000 saw an upward trend in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million to 1.2 million.

句式四：表示趋势的名词+be+seen/experienced/witnessed+in+变化的主体+时间

Eg: An upward trend was seen in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2million in 2000.

二、静态图

静态图常见的是柱图，饼图和表格题。静态图的写作思路相对比较多元化，重点在比较关系上，利用比较句式和排序方式来展开。我们主要也从以下几个角度来分析：

1. 解题思路

1). 表格题的静态题解题思路大致可以分为三步：①先分类(横向，纵向或者横竖交替);②挑出极值(最大值与最小值);③挑选剩余数值(倍数关系，两个数值，变化明显的数值);

2). 静态柱图解题思路：第一种：①按颜色来分类;②总体做比较。第二种：①按特征分(把有相同特征的分在一起);

3). 静态饼图解题思路：①若单个饼图不相关时，单个饼图分开写最后整体总结;②若是同一相关事物的比较也是按颜色特征先分类，后作比较。

2. 基础替换词汇

1). 占据：

take up / make up / occupy/ account for

Constitute / be the instrument of 致成物

2). 剩余事物：

the rest

the remainder

sth is in the charge of

due to/owing to/attributed/ascribed to/ for sth

60%= three-fifths/three out of five

5/6=five-sixths

a/the majority of = a large portion/ part/ share / proportion/ percentage

>80% (93%)= a lion’s share/maximal proportion of

5%= a minority of, a tiny portion

37.8%= comparatively a majority of (<50%的最大值)

87%/76% = comparatively a minority of

3. 静态图表示数值方式句式表达

1). 多个事物的排列法一(饼图，柱形图，表格)

①A is the largest/smallest/longest...

②B is a close/far second with just+数字less.

或者：which is followed by B.

③Third comes C with only +数字

或者：C is close/far behind with +数字

或者：C takes third spot/place with +数字

④Following C comes D with +数字

⑤Finally/the rest is ,……

2). 多个事物的排列法二(饼图，柱形图，表格)

A occupied the maximal portion of the 研究对象, with 数字, while B accounted for comparatively less rate, with only _(占据), ranking second. Furthermore, the third, forth and fifth places(或者用数字)altogether of the 研究对象 was shared by C,D and E(共享). The remaining part of it was due to F, G, H, I and J which follow the same trend and taking sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth and tenth respectively.(剩余)

雅思作文长难句使用三大建议

建议一：避免空洞的单词和词组

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。

比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

建议二：避免重复

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

更简洁的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm。

建议三：选择最恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：

1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。

例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm。

从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。

2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构

例如下面的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather。

可以改为：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。

更简洁的句式为：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。

3.把从句改为短语或单词。

例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote。

简介的表达方式为：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。

例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family。

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”，而使用了被动语态後，彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay。

5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，

例如：My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends。

Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达，即loiter：

My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。

6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达

例如：Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree。

两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。