雅思写作论点会影响评分吗

托福独立写作要求考生自行选择或者提炼观点并进行合理论述，而对于观点也要求大家能够从不同角度来进行论证，因此考生对于话题需要有一定的展开develop能力。下面小编就和大家分享　托福独立写作面对题目不知道如何展开，希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧!

托福独立写作面对题目不知道如何展开

官方指南OG对作文题目展开的要求介绍

首先我们来看一下OG是如何要求well-developed的：

ave I done my best to support and develop my ideas?

(有没有支持立场的分论点?)

o I include enough details in each paragraph so that the main idea and topic sentence are explained fully?

(每段是否有很充分的细节支持分论点?)

o I use words and phrases that help the reader think about relationships between different ideas in the essay?

(句与句之间是否有用逻辑连接词/短语?)

不是硬塞逻辑词就能强行展开

每个段落要做到很好的展开，就要注意句与句之间的逻辑性。OG中介绍了很多种展开的方法，包括讲故事、举例子、说道理等等，同时补充了大量的逻辑连接词。同学们习惯于把逻辑连接词/短语事先准备好，平时练习或者考试时都先打出来再往里面僵硬地填充内容，以为可以骗过e-rater和考官。但在这些逻辑词下，我们往往会看到同学写出这样的内容：因为独生子女，所以自私;因为科技和经济发展，所以压力大。

其实第二句和第一句之间并没有直接的因果关系，第二句并不是对第一句的进一步论述，所以即便有暗示逻辑关系的连接词/短语，内容上并非如此。也就是不符合评分标准中的渐进性(progression)。

实例讲解如何展开论述逻辑链

在上面第一个“因为独生子女，所以自私”的例子中，我们可以这样推理：独生子女(only-child)→得到更多家人的关注(limelight)→缺少付出的意识(less give, more take)→自私(egoism);此外，独生子女→缺少和兄弟姐妹的相处(interact with siblings)→缺少分享的意识(share)→自私。这样的两条简单逻辑链就可以推出“自私”的结果。

第二个“因为科技和经济发展，所以压力大”的例子展开方式也有很多，大家即可以说科技和经济发展→人口增加竞争激烈→压力大，也可以说科技和经济发展→工作方式更加复杂→要掌握的工作技能更多→压力大。同样是两条逻辑链让推导变得更加合理自洽。

所以针对这一问题，小编建议同学们结合托福考前预测机经中的主题句，在草稿纸上用中文关键词罗列因果链，训练演绎推理的方法，反复追问因果关系(causality)是否成立。

关于如何展开托福写作题目小编就为大家介绍到这里，考生想要避免遇到看见作文题目不知道如何展开的情况，学习一下本文中的逻辑展开写作思路，相信会获得更多启发和灵感。

托福写作模板:同事品质

托福写作模板及范文参考：

We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion， what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.

托福写作范文参考：

We spend more time with our co-workers during a week than we do with our family. Thus， it's important for our co-workers to be people we can get along with. I've worked in a lot of offices， and I've found there are certain characteristics that all good co-workers have in common.

A good co-worker is very cooperative. She does her best to get along with others. She tries to keep her end of things flowing smoothly to help others in the office. She realizes that if one person doesn't get her work done， it can hold up everyone else. She has a positive attitude that creates a pleasant working environment.

A good co-worker is adaptable. She is not stubborn about changes in schedules or routines， and doesn't object to having her job description revised. That can make life miserable for everyone around her. A good co-worker is willing to change her schedule to accommodate another worker's emergency. She has no problem with new procedures and welcomes changes when they come.

A good co-worker is helpful. She pitches in when someone falls behind in his or her work. She's willing to do whatever it takes to get the job done. She doesn't keep track of how often she has to finish another's work or take on extra work. Some co-workers do their own job， period. They have no sense of office community. They only want to do their work， get paid and go home.

A good co-worker is a sympathetic listener， and never uses what she learns against people. She doesn't gossip. A bad co-worker uses negative rumors to take advantage of others. Being a good co-worker isn't too hard， but some people just can't seem to manage it. Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if everyone could?

托福写作模板:小孩成长环境

托福写作模板及范文参考：

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

托福写作范文参考：

With the development of the transportation system and some residence institution， the world is getting smaller and smaller， and people are not restricted in only one area. In addition to the convenient condition， because there are different places with different cultures， living standards， education environment and other disparity， they are inclined to transfer from one place to the other. Is it better to move around than stay in one place? I believe there are no uniform answers，but in my opinion， I do agree with the claim that to move around is better than to stay in one place.

Most people's growth comes with the transfers in their life. As for me， when I was young I lived in a small county. Because the school in there was not suitable to me， I transferred from my little county to a city to get a better education. As soon as I got to the city， I was amazed that the world here was so different here as my hometown .If I still lived in my hometown， it was impossible for me to make the wildest guess at what the real world looked like. The first transfer has made me to imagine my own life and spur on me to go further. With the confidence， I went into a university which I would never think of it before. The university is located in a different city so that I have to come into another world. Compared with my living city， the one is more complicated in which there are different people， more convenient transportation， more competitive environment. I love all of this very much. Communicating with different students and teachers， I have learned much from them which will benefit me throughout my life and my lifestyle. Now I am in a graduate school also so beautiful that I will never regret my selection of leaving my hometown because the transfer has given me a splendid life.

Also， like we students， there are many adults transferring their work place in order to grasp better opportunities. No matter in industry， in agriculture or in service， workers have rights to choose their work companies which leads them to work from place to place and then they accumulate precious experience and skills to get priorities to others.

People not only transfer in their own country， but also go abroad to get education， work or live through the rest of their life in appropriate countries. We can see that many students including me want to go to the foreign countries to study further and forge ourselves， and that many parents send their little sons or daughters to foreign countries to study. After all， diverse circumstances give persons new experience and broaden their narrow sight， even help them get more comprehensive understanding of the world， the society and our life itself.

However， some people may say that if people move around， they will pay for much such as money， time and energy. It is right to say that it takes one person some time to get used to his or her new environment， new personal relationship which indeed influences the growth of children， the efficiency of our work and the stability of our society and family. And I have to admit that people should make considerate plans before changing their places and may not transfer aimlessly and frequently. But I think sometimes it is just all the friction that has made the world wealthier and more beautiful. Therefore， I still think it is better to travel around than to live in one place.