雅思写作审题的雷区解析

对于中国考试而言，大家最头疼就是雅思口语和雅思写作部分了。千千万万的雅思词汇，终于背的差不多了但是雅思写作成绩依然上不去?今天小编给大家带来了雅思写作高分句型,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。

雅思写作高分句型

雅思高分句型1：

In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, people's second thought is to...

(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)

1 根据上面提到的A的负面因素/不利因素/缺陷，人们另一个想法是…

例：根据上面提到的提高产量的负面因素，我们的另一个想法是提高产品质量。

雅思高分句型2:

To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...

(e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)

为了对抗/抵消/取消A的不良/负面影响/结果，B被提出作为对…的另一个更好的做法/解决办法。

例：为了对抗管理僵化的不良影响，感情投资被提出作为商业成功的另一个更好的做法。

雅思高分句型3:

In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A has brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution/course to...namely...

(e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)

然而，人们努力对抗A所带来的负面/不和谐因素，提出了另一个方法/解决办法/做法…即…

例：为了努力消除考试教育带来的不良的一面，教育工作者对这一问题提出了另一途径，即素质教育。

雅思高分句型4：

In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/toward the solution for the problem of...

(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.)

与A的缺点相比，B对解决…的问题在正确的方向上更进了一步。

例：与核电的缺点相比，太阳能可作为更好的办法来解决能源问题。

雅思高分句型5：

So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.

(e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)

当谈到对A的问题/局限/错误/弱点的有效补救/平衡，人们自然就想到了B。

例：因此当谈到竞争的坏处的有效补救时，人们自然就想到了合作。

雅思高分句型6：

But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage/weakness that...

但它也同时带来了…的负面效应/不利因素/弱点。

雅思高分句型7：

However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example...

然而并非没有限制/问题/瑕疵/缺点，例如…

雅思高分句型8：

Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...

如同其他任何事物一样，它也有不好的一面，…就是明证。

雅思高分句型9：

For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.

尽管A具有优势/好处/正面效应，它却有一些坏处/危害/负面效应。

雅思高分句型10：

To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.

然而为了能达到这一目标，我们仍有很多工作要做/很多障碍要消除。

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Model Answer 1:

I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I believe that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.

For several reasons, I think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. First of all, factories often bring pollution. They are prone to contaminating the local air and water. Second of all, factories make noise. Another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. As a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. So, all these obviously will not make one's life happier and healthier in my community.

From the other side, I believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. First of all, it will bring new job opportunities. Many specialists will be required to work there. Second of all, I think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. So, some old pipes may be changed. Another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.

However, I do not think that listed above benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. From my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people's health.

Model Answer 2:

New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution. In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise.

Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To

accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered.

I believe that this growth will change our city too much. I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I mould miss that greatly.

A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.

雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?

Model Answer:

Some people think that old, historic buildings are no need for the city and they should be destroyed and replaced with modern ones. However, other people believe that historic buildings must be preserved in order to know and remember our past. For several reasons that I will mention bellow I agree with those people who want to preserve old, historical buildings.

First of all, by preserving historical buildings we pass our history to our future generations. I think that out children should know their history, learn from it and respect it. People need to know their traditions and customs, which are priceless and irreplaceable. Our history is our knowledge and power. From my opinion we need to preserve and restore historical buildings. By destroying them we show our disrespect to our forefathers and their traditions.

Second of all, by preserving historical buildings a city can attract many travelers. Welcoming tourists a city can get many benefits including money, which can be spent on preserving historical buildings as well as on improving roads and facilities.

Also, many tourists mean a lot of new business opportunities. Another important aspect of this is that businessmen will be willing to build new recreational centers, hotels, movie theaters, shopping centers to make a city more attractive for travelers. In addition to those practical benefits, many people will have the opportunity to get a job. All this is good for the economy of the city.

To sum up, I believe that preserving old, historical buildings can bring only benefits to a city and all humankind.