09年中考英语写作突破：常用句型 词汇

　　完型填空 (补全短文)

　　"三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作题;第三遍检查确认

　　例题:

　　Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.

　　"I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river."

　　On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars."

　　答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before

　　7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end

　　3.短文写作

　　短文写作评分标准

　　评分标准:

　　第一档:(15分-13分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法无误,词汇拼写正确,卷面整洁。

　　第二档:(12分-10分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法有少量错误,少量拼写错误,卷面欠整洁。

　　第三档:(9分-6分)基本符合题目要求,漏掉若干关键词,超出了题目限制,整篇表达基本清楚,语言有部分错误。

　　第四档:(3分-5分) 只能写出题目要求的一两个要点;只有个别句子能看懂,语法、词汇错误很多。

　　第五档:(1分-2分)只写出了符合题意的若干单词。

　　写作要求: 符合题意;逻辑通畅;语法单词正确;卷面清洁。

　　写作的难题--写作的步骤

　　篇--段--句--词

　　1."篇" 明确主题

　　2."段" 构建结构

　　运用"提纲"

　　提纲案例

　　《我最喜爱的老师》

　　篇 主题:

　　段 提纲: 1. 老师基本信息介绍

　　a. 年龄

　　b. 相貌

　　c. 所授科目

　　d. …

　　2.令我感动的小故事 (描写与叙事相结合)

　　a. 时间 b. 地点 c. 事情的经过 d. 关键词 shy; encourage

　　3.我对老师的评价

　　关键词:enjoy his class; like

　　3. "句" 填充内容

　　多用短句(简单句),慎用长句(并列句/复合句/并列复合句)

　　文中参杂若干语法正确的长句能够成为亮点并得到加分。

　　短句为主,辅之于长句。

　　句子的完整、时态、人称、单复数、以及动词的变形。

　　修辞

　　比喻 像…

　　be like The house is like a tank.

　　He is like a panda.

　　as… as… I am as hungry as a wolf.

　　The teacher is as busy as a bee.

　　He is as strong as a horse.

　　夸张 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.

　　拟人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.

　　4."词"

　　可分为 "一般词汇" 和 "具体词汇"

　　一般词汇 He is a good man. good

　　→ 具体词汇 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.

　　"一般描写" 和 "具体描写"

　　一般描写 She is very beautiful.

　　→ 具体描写 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.