高考作文果然是提笔千钧,转而一想:“作文之法不正如人行路上。不禁暗暗自得。
The college entrance examination composition is indeed a great success. Instead, I thought: "the composition method is not like the human way. I can't help feeling complacent.
作文恰如行路,有人昂首阔步,气势凌人;有人亦步亦趋,低唱徐吟;有人正气浩然,仰天长啸。但要记住:怎么走都要走在自己的路上!
The composition is just like the road. Some people walk with their heads held high and are domineering. Some follow suit and sing in low voice. Some people are upright and roaring up to the sky. But remember: you have to walk on your own way!
曾记否?一篇《赤兔之死》轰动文坛,小生有幸拜读,确是佳作。但此之后,方言之作犹如雨后春草,呈现疯狂态势,人人都走上了返古的老路。于是乎,屈原从汩罗中爬上来又跳下去;项羽自刎更是免费表演,随处可见;韩信干脆赖在胯下讨生活,何其悲哉!想我堂堂五千年历史,都不够后来人习作用例了。
Ever remember? A "death of the red rabbit" caused a stir in the literary world. It was a good work for Xiaosheng to read it. However, after this, dialect works, like spring grass after rain, show a crazy trend, and everyone is on the old way back to ancient times. So Qu Yuan climbed up from the guru and jumped down; Xiang Yu's suicide was a free performance, which can be seen everywhere; Han Xin simply depended on his crotch to make a living, how sad! I think five thousand years of history is not enough for later generations to learn from examples.
走上了返古的老路,故事新编也到了尽头。一眼望去尽是学子们迷茫的眼神。不明白,真不明白!同一条路,前人走过创造了辉煌,而今再走却是“山重水复疑无路”。可悲!可叹!不知他们是否真不明白;李商隐、杜牧的诗,再好也只是小李杜;即便做了十足的古人,写出十足十的古文,也不过是“代古人言尔”!
On the old road back to ancient times, the new story has come to an end. At one glance, all the students' confused eyes. I don't understand, I don't understand! In the same way, the past has created brilliant achievements, but now it is "heavy mountain, heavy water and no doubt". Pathetic! Deplorable! I don't know if they really don't understand it. Li Shangyin's and Du Mu's poems, no matter how good they are, are just Xiao Li and Du. Even if they were full ancients and wrote full ten ancient texts, they were just "words of the ancients"!
别人的路学不得了,不如开辟自己的吧!那又是怎么样呢?
Others can't learn the way. It's better to open up your own! So what?
想当年,韩寒半个小时一篇《杯中窥人》何其伟哉!于是又一批学子走上创新之路,通篇文学支离破碎叫有个性,一首诗谁也看不懂叫有深度,看到天空一片羽毛落下便汗流满面这叫有文人情怀。走前人老路固然不妥,但纠枉过正想从中国直接打通地心去美国也是行不通的。
Think that year, Han Han half an hour a "peep in the cup" he Qiwei! Therefore, another group of students embarked on the road of innovation. The whole literature is fragmented, which is called individuality. No one can understand a poem, which is called depth. Seeing a feather in the sky falling, they sweat all over their faces, which is called literati feelings. It's not appropriate to follow the old road of predecessors, but it's also not feasible to correct the mistakes and try to get through to the United States directly from China.
自己的路来源于前人,而又不拘泥于前人,方能走出自己的辉煌。
Only when one's own road comes from the predecessors and does not stick to the predecessors, can one get out of his brilliance.
楚辞、汉赋、唐诗、宋词、元曲、明清小说,哪一样不能在前人身上找到印迹,又哪一样不具有鲜明的时代特征?
Chu Ci, Han Fu, Tang poetry, Song Ci, Yuan Qu, novels of Ming and Qing Dynasties, which one can not be found in the predecessors, which one does not have distinctive characteristics of the times?
我们的作文也要走出自己的路,做创新的人。
Our composition should also go out of our own way and be innovative.
说到离别,再不是折柳相送、灞桥泪别,现代的通讯足以维持两个人的联系了。如今再说“西出阳关无故人”,至于吗?一个电话、一架飞机,到哪都能“劝君更尽一杯酒”,是不是?
When it comes to parting, it's no longer the farewell of willows or Baqiao tears. Modern communication is enough to maintain the connection between the two people. Now we say "there is no one who goes out of Yangguan in the west". As for it? A phone call or a plane can "persuade you to drink more wine" everywhere, right?
故而,作文当重创新,做人当有个性,走路当走出一条属于自己的路。
Therefore, composition should focus on innovation, be a person with personality, and walk out of a way of their own.
用《西游记》的一句歌词结尾吧!“敢问路在何方,路在脚下……”
Let's end with a line from journey to the West! "Where is the road? The road is at the foot..."