夏日里的炎热炙烤着大地，不知不觉中，海边多起了游泳的人。向远处望去，几个小孩像在搜寻着什么。带着好奇，我走了过去，才知他们是在寻找珍珠……
The heat of summer scorches the earth. Unconsciously, there are many swimmers by the sea. Looking into the distance, several children seem to be searching for something. With curiosity, I went over to know that they were looking for pearls
一颗小小的沙砾被蚌无意识地吞噬在嘴里，蚌觉得好痛，似乎有一把尖刀刺向它的喉咙。但一切都无可奈何，只能日日夜夜地把它磨小、磨亮才能将它吐出。终于有一天，蚌被海水冲上了海滩，一个小男孩发现了蚌嘴里的沙砾，把它取了出来，但它不再是粗糙的沙砾，而是一颗灿烂夺目的珍珠，蚌感觉轻松了许多，重新回到了海洋中。蚌育珍珠从此为人们所知，于是它的故事被人们所传颂，生命从此有了夺目的光彩，每一次去海边，我都带着崇高的敬意注视着蚌的艰辛。
A small gravel was unconsciously swallowed by the clam. The clam felt so painful that he seemed to have a sharp knife stabbed at his throat. But there's nothing to do about it. You can only grind it small and bright day and night to spit it out. Finally one day, the clam was washed to the beach by the sea water. A little boy found the gravel in the clam's mouth and took it out, but it was no longer rough gravel, but a brilliant pearl. The clam felt relaxed and returned to the sea. Since then, the Pearl of bengyu has been known by people, so its story has been praised by people, and life has a dazzling luster. Every time I go to the seaside, I look at the hardships of Beng with high respect.
蛹破茧成蝶，完成了生命的诠释,用那五光十色的翅膀向人们展现了艰辛后的笑容。雨燕减肥，只为飞翔，只为在蓝天的庇护下，穿过了艰辛，让生命的乐章高昂激荡。
The chrysalis broke into a butterfly, completed the interpretation of life, and showed people the smile after hardship with its colorful wings. Swift to lose weight, only to fly, only in the protection of the blue sky, through the hardships, let the music of life high agitation.
它是汹涌澎湃的波浪，拍打着裸露的海岸，从此海岸的大石多了几对白发的老人，几个充满纯真笑容的小孩……
It is a surging wave, beating the naked coast. Since then, there have been several pairs of white haired old people and children with innocent smiles on the big stones of the coast
它是阻挡小溪流入大海的高山，它用尖利的岩石刺痛小溪的身体。然而小溪却奏出了叮当的清脆响声……流过它，小溪见到了大海。
It is a mountain that blocks the stream from flowing into the sea. It stabs the stream with sharp rocks. But the brook makes a tinkling sound Flowing through it, the stream sees the sea.
它是我们前面的荆棘，阻挡着我们前进。穿过它，我们将体味到成功的滋味，从此生活中便会多一份信心。是的，每一次的巧遇，让它成为了我人生路上的主顾。我曾试着逃避，带着鸿雁的云羽荡落云霄，我曾试着放弃，重新回到起点，但一切又是那么的渺茫。仰望天空，没有一片云彩，只有“黑云压城城欲摧”的感觉。忽然，耳畔似回荡着阵阵呼喊，“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”！激昂的笑声中充满希望，带着拼搏的力量冲向天空最高处。
It's the bramble in front of us, holding us back. Through it, we will experience the taste of success and have more confidence in life. Yes, every chance encounter makes it a customer on my life. I have tried to escape, with the clouds and feathers of wild geese, I have tried to give up and return to the starting point, but everything is so slim. Looking up at the sky, there is no cloud, only the feeling of "black cloud is crushing the city". All of a sudden, the ear seems to reverberate with shouts, "the long wind and waves will sometimes, directly hang the cloud sail to help the sea"! Full of hope in the passionate laughter, with the strength of struggle, rushed to the highest place in the sky.
我的心为之一震，眼前不再是一片迷蒙的烟雾，我收拾行囊恨不得一脚跳过它。可我知道，凡事都得经过千辛万苦才显得更充实，生命才会更加壮美。
My heart for one of the shock, the eyes is no longer a hazy smoke, I packed my bags would like to jump over it. But I know that everything has to go through a lot of hardships to be more substantial, life will be more magnificent.
海风袭来，夕阳的余晖映红了一大片海洋。余晖穿过地平线留下了壮美的海景，而我已大步走向前方，我相信穿过它，我的生命将会更加壮美，如蛹破茧成蝶的壮举。
When the sea breeze blows, the afterglow of the setting sun reddenes a large ocean. The afterglow has left a magnificent sea view across the horizon, and I have stridden to the front. I believe that through it, my life will be more magnificent, such as the feat of breaking a chrysalis into a butterfly.
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蚌育珍珠是许多人都知道的故事，它包含着一个经历艰辛困苦获得成功的道理，这个事例能很好地契合“雨燕减肥”这一话题的深刻寓意。文章脉络清晰，从蚌育珍珠写起，中间部分采取排比式段落点明标题中的“它”所指的内容，接着将“我”置于其中，以隐喻的写法，把“我”突破困扰找到前进方向的心灵历程展现出来，最后一段，呼应文题，点明主旨。全文立意高，文采足，被评为满分。
Many people know the story of pearl growing in clam, which contains a truth of success through hardship. This case can well fit the profound meaning of the topic of "swallow lose weight". The article has a clear context. From the beginning, the middle part of the article uses a parallel paragraph to point out the content of "it" in the title, then puts "I" in it, and shows the spiritual process of "I" breaking through the puzzle and finding the way to go. The last paragraph, echoing the topic, points out the main idea. The full text is of high intention and full literary style, and is rated as full score.
