穿过它，生命从此壮美

傲然挺立于飞沙走石的沙漠之中的胡杨，创造了“三百年不死，三百年不倒，三百年不朽”的奇迹，它们追求的是与沙漠抗争的坚强与不屈，却从不向往微风吹拂、细雨飘落的江南水乡。在不屈信念的追求中，它们保持了最真的自我，认清了自我价值的真正所在。

The Populus euphratica stands proudly in the desert, creating a miracle of "three hundred years immortal, three hundred years immortal, three hundred years immortal". They pursue the firmness and indomitability of fighting against the desert, but never yearn for the Jiangnan water town where the breeze blows and the drizzle falls. In the pursuit of unyielding belief, they maintain the most real self and recognize the real value of self.

人生亦如此。人应该有所追求，但不是盲目地追求。保持一颗清醒的头脑，认清自我，才能更好地实现人生的价值。

So is life. People should pursue something, but not blindly. Only by keeping a clear mind and recognizing oneself can we realize the value of life better.

伟大的爱国诗人屈原，在人生中能保持最真实的追求。他没有在尔虞我诈的官场中同流合污，而是发出了“举世皆浊而我独清，众人皆醉而我独醒”的感慨；他没有在污浊的官场中“随其流而扬其波，哺其糟而啜其醴”，宁愿投身汨罗，也不愿污其追求。他在人生的追求中，从不忘自我的真正价值，在现实的考验面前，他留给我们的是流芳百世的美名。

Qu Yuan, the great patriotic poet, can keep the most real pursuit in his life. He did not mingle with others in the treacherous officialdom, but expressed the feeling that "the whole world is turbid and I am only clear, everyone is drunk and I wake up alone"; he did not "follow the current and spread its waves, feed its bad and sip its Li" in the turbid officialdom, preferring to join Miluo rather than contaminate its pursuit. In his pursuit of life, he never forgets the real value of himself. In front of the test of reality, what he left us is the fame of a hundred generations.

人生的追求应该是多种多样的，就像婀娜多姿的杨柳向往多姿多彩的春天，鸟儿向往蓝天白云一样，应永远记住自己最真实的身份，认清自我价值，而不可以超越这个极限，去做不自量力的事。

The pursuit of life should be diverse, just as graceful willows yearn for colorful spring and birds yearn for blue sky and white clouds, they should always remember their most authentic identity and recognize their own value, instead of exceeding this limit to do something beyond their own capacity.

浪漫主义大诗人李白，留给我们无穷的财富和智慧。他没有因为仕途失意而忘却自我的价值。他那“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”的洒脱与豪放，是他内心品质的真正写照。陶渊明“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”的安静与闲适淡远，带给我们无穷的享受。他们在自己的追求中，找到了适合自己的人生价值，并没有在失意中迷失自我。

Li Bai, the great romantic poet, left us infinite wealth and wisdom. He didn't forget his value because of his career failure. His free and easy and unrestrained attitude of "being able to crush the brow and bend the waist, making me unhappy" is the true portrayal of his inner quality. Tao Yuanming's "picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the Nanshan Mountain" quiet and leisure brings us endless enjoyment. In their pursuit, they find their own life value, not lost in frustration.

找到适合自己的价值取向，才能更好地体味人生的情趣，而不应该盲目地追求，不应该忘却自己的真实身份。

Only by finding a suitable value orientation can we better appreciate the taste of life, instead of blindly pursuing and forgetting our true identity.

我们在苏轼的“乱石穿空，惊涛拍岸，卷起千堆雪”的豪情当中感受雄浑壮志。在追求中认清自我价值是一种智慧，一种人生的选择。

We feel vigorous and ambitious in Su Shi's passion of "breaking rocks through the sky, breaking waves on the bank, rolling up thousands of piles of snow". In the pursuit of self-worth is a kind of wisdom, a choice of life.

人们都说，人生的追求不应该是一样的，要不然，每个人都会失去自我，失去人生本应有的丰富多彩。

People all say that the pursuit of life should not be the same, otherwise, everyone will lose their self and the richness of life.

人生的漫漫征程需要我们用奋斗去闯荡，在人生的追求当中，清醒地认识自我的价值，才能在人生旅途创造生命的辉煌！

The long journey of life requires us to make a living with struggle. In the pursuit of life, we should have a clear understanding of our own value, so as to create a brilliant life in the journey of life!

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这位考生对所给寓言的寓意把握准确，所拟题目“在追求中认清自我价值”，正是全文的中心论点。文章由自然界的胡杨及“人生亦如此”提出观点后，采用的是层进式结构，以屈原、李白、陶渊明、苏轼等人为实例，事理结合，层层深入地阐明了论点，例证丰富，说理透彻，令人信服。另外，诗句的引用，比喻等修辞手法的运用，使文句优美流畅。

This examinee has a good command of the allegory, and the topic "recognizing self value in pursuit" is the central point of the thesis. After the natural Populus euphratica and "life is the same", this paper adopts the hierarchical structure, taking Qu Yuan, Li Bai, Tao Yuanming, Su Shi and others as examples, combining the facts and reasoning, and elaborating the arguments layer by layer, with rich examples, thorough reasoning and convincing. In addition, the use of rhetorical devices, such as quotation and metaphor, makes the sentences beautiful and fluent.