小船升起云帆，横济沧海的航程中难免会有风吹浪打；小树初有新芽，茁壮成长中难免会遭受雨雪风霜；小溪向前奔流，一路上不只有泉水叮咚，也有险滩漩涡。?
When the small boat raises the cloud sail, it will inevitably be hit by the wind and waves in the course of crossing the sea; when the small tree starts to sprout, it will inevitably suffer from rain, snow and frost in the course of growing up; when the stream runs forward, there are not only springs and dangerous beaches and whirlpools along the way. ?
青少年的成长亦如此。
So does the growth of teenagers.
成长的过程便如登山的旅程，难免会跌跤，会有荆棘的划痕，会有一次次的摔打和磨砺。这些都是正常现象，家庭、学校和社会都不必太在意，以一颗平常心去看便好。
The process of growing up is like the journey of mountaineering. It is inevitable that you will fall down, get scratched by thorns, and get beaten and honed again and again. These are normal phenomena. Families, schools and society don't need to pay much attention to them. It's better to look at them with a common heart.
正如一艘扬帆起航的小船，自会在风雨的磨炼中变得坚强。太多的关心、保护，反而会给它小小的船舱添上无谓的负荷，成为前进的压力与障碍。在父母的羽翼下寻求庇护的日子早已过去，我们已经渴望敞开胸膛，拥抱雷雨闪电，享受自然的阳光。当孩子在人生路上开始迈出自己的步子，家庭应给予理解和支持，请解除目光的锁链，让孩子乘着自己的人生之舟与风浪一搏吧！当前进的路上遭遇坎坷，当孩子受到挫折时，我们的家庭要保持一颗平常心，不要急于代劳，不要过分关爱，更不要小题大做，只需微笑着看着孩子爬起，那叶小舟自然会顺着信任的目光扬帆前行。
Just like a small boat sailing, it will become strong in the wind and rain. Too much care and protection, on the contrary, will add meaningless load to its small cabin and become the pressure and obstacle for its progress. The days of seeking shelter under our parents' wings are long gone. We are eager to open our hearts, embrace thunderstorms and lightning, and enjoy the natural sunshine. When children start to take their own steps on the road of life, the family should give understanding and support, please remove the chain of vision, let children take their own life boat and fight with the waves! When the road ahead is bumpy, when the children are frustrated, our family should keep a normal heart, do not rush to work for them, do not care too much, do not make a fuss, just smile and watch the children climb up, then ye Xiaozhou will naturally sail along with the eyes of trust.
希望孩子们十全十美的学校也不应过分苛求。“人非圣贤，孰能无过？”微小的失误在所难免，其实是架起了一座通往成熟的金桥。不要将目光聚焦于孩子的小小失误，不要在孩子摔跤时投去指责的目光。用信任和宽容去对待孩子的小失误吧，这样，他们才会成为带着成熟微笑的舵手，从胜利的彼岸带回满意的答卷。
I hope the perfect school for children should not be too demanding. "A man is not a sage, but a man of no fault?" Small mistakes are inevitable. In fact, it is a golden bridge to maturity. Don't focus on your child's small mistakes. Don't look at your child's wrestling with criticism. Treat children's small mistakes with trust and tolerance, so that they can become helmsman with mature smile and bring back satisfactory answers from the other side of victory.
最后，我们的社会也应重新审视对青少年的态度。从早先的反对溺爱，到现在的提倡挫折教育，社会的整体教育观念已有了可喜的变化。对于孩子们的偶尔跌跤，社会不应给以过度的关注，更不能大肆炒作。初登处女航的小船，还在对这个社会知之甚少的轻微恐惧中微微颤动。太多的镁光灯突然一齐聚焦，只会让小船疑惑和恐慌，云帆在航行中倾斜一下，社会可以淡淡一笑，放下过多的牵挂，自立自强的一代自会崛起。
Finally, our society should also re-examine the attitude towards teenagers. From the early opposition to doting to the present advocacy of setback education, the overall concept of education in society has undergone gratifying changes. Society should not pay too much attention to children's occasional falls, let alone hype them. The boat, which had first embarked on its maiden voyage, was still quivering in a slight fear of the society, which it knew little about. Too many spotlights suddenly focus together, which will only make the boat confused and panicked. When the cloud sail tilts during the voyage, the society can smile lightly, put down too many concerns, and the self-reliance generation will rise.
成龙的孩子房祖明曾写过一首叫作《请让我摔下去》的歌，道出了千万个孩子困扰的心境。在人生路上跌一跤本在所难免，可怕的是家庭、学校、社会的目光立刻蜂拥而上，织成一张密密的网，让孩子在迷惑中百般挣扎而不能自己站起，只得在无奈中成为目光的俘虏。?
Chan's son, Fang Zuming, once wrote a song called "please let me fall", which expressed the troubled mood of tens of millions of children. It's inevitable to fall down on the road of life. What's terrible is that the eyes of family, school and society immediately flock to each other and weave into a dense net, so that children can't stand up in bewilderment, so they have to become captives of their eyes in helplessness. ?
可是快看，那艘为目光所缚的小船，正拼命地向远方鼓足云帆。就请家庭松开过度关爱的目光，请学校放下过分指责的目光，请社会转移过于关注的目光，将它们换为理解与宽容，放那一叶云帆去济沧海吧！
But look, the boat, which is bound by the eyes, is desperately drumming cloud sails to the distance. Let's ask the family to let go of the excessive care, the school to let go of the excessive criticism, and the society to turn the excessive attention into understanding and tolerance. Let's go to jicanghai!
名师点评
Famous teachers' comments
考场作文要学会“化题为象”。所谓“化题为象”，是指善于借助“象形想象”，化抽象为具象，用具体生动的形象来表情达意，力避概念化图解话题。这篇作文的作者深谙此道，他把成长中的孩子比作“一艘扬帆起航的小船”，全文的阐述紧紧扣住“一叶云帆”这个意象，强调小船“自会在风雨的磨炼中变得坚强”，这就大大增强了文章的可读性，使其更能吸引人、说服人。
The composition of the examination room should learn to "turn the question into an image". The so-called "turning a topic into an image" refers to being good at using "pictographic imagination" to turn an abstract into a concrete image, expressing one's mind with a concrete and vivid image, and avoiding the topic of conceptualization and illustration. The author of this composition is well versed in this way. He compares the growing children to "a boat sailing". The full text of the elaboration closely clasps the image of "a leaf of cloud sail", and emphasizes that the boat "will become strong in the trials of wind and rain", which greatly enhances the readability of the article and makes it more attractive and persuasive.
此外，文章中心明确，语言表达富有意蕴，像“请解除目光的锁链，让孩子乘着自己的人生之舟与风浪一搏吧”“这样，他们才会成为带着成熟微笑的舵手，从胜利的彼岸带回满意的答卷”等，读来耐人回味。标题“且放云帆济沧海”化用唐诗名句，也有新意，且与文章内容相得益彰。
In addition, the center of the article is clear, and the language expression is full of meaning, such as "please remove the chain of vision, let the children take their own life boat to fight with the wind and waves", "in this way, they will become the helmsman with a mature smile, bringing back satisfactory answers from the other side of the victory", etc., which will bear people's aftertaste. The title "let the clouds sail for the sea" is a famous sentence of Tang poetry, which also has new ideas and complements the content of the article.
