The spring is coming.I looked out,I can find some flowers are growing.The grass is green.Everywhere in spring is beautiful.I love spring.
Sometimes I walk on the garden.I can hear the songs from birds,they're excited,they make me relax.
I enjoy the spring.Because the air that after spring rain is clean.I can play with the rain,it likes fairy，flies in the sky freely.
Do you relize the spring is coming?Do you see the tree growing?Do you hear the birds are singing?I lov-e the spring very much.I can go hiking with my friends,I can ride bike on the road.I am running on th-e play-ground and breathing the fresh air.
I hug in spring.What about you?
修改后：
The spring is coming. When I look out of the window, I can find some flowers begin to bloom. The grass is green. Everywhere in spring is beautiful. I love spring.
Sometimes I walk in the garden. I can hear the birds singing happily which makes me relax.
I enjoy the spring, espeically, the rain. I can not only play in the rain but also breathe the fresh air after the rain.
Do you feel the coming of spring? Do you see the tree growing? Do you hear the birds singing? I love the spring very much. I can go hiking with my friends, I can ride bikes on the road. I can on the playground and breathe the fresh air.
I open my arms and hug the spring.What about you?
修改老师：Crystal 老师
初二:陆筝
