6年中考满分作文:走进西藏

我成长中经历的财富

The wealth I experienced growing up

一

One

清楚地记得，小时的我是那么淘气，那么贪玩。夏天即使是大雨滂沱也要在雨中光着脚丫，在大地这架大琴盘上，与雨滴一起击奏欢乐的节拍。冬天，纵然天寒地冻，千里冰封，我也在雪地里与伙伴们掷雪球、堆雪人，鼻尖冻得通红，嘴里哈着热气，脸上溢满快乐。那时的生活虽然有些艰活，所以我觉得我更应该快乐。与他们相比，我不用承担生活的艰辛，却可以享受生活的快乐，他们的微笑时时感染着我，让我体会着生活的美好与甜蜜。

I remember clearly that I was so naughty and playful when I was young. In summer, even if it's raining heavily, you should be barefooted in the rain. On the big piano plate of the earth, you can play the joyful beat together with the raindrops. In winter, even though it's freezing and frozen for thousands of miles, I throw snowballs and make snowmen with my friends in the snow. The tip of my nose is red with cold, and my mouth is hot, and my face is full of happiness. At that time, although life was a little difficult, so I think I should be more happy. Compared with them, I don't have to bear the hardships of life, but I can enjoy the happiness of life. Their smile always infects me and makes me feel the beauty and sweetness of life.

于是，微笑着，真诚地，在风雨中我度过了欢乐的童年。

So, smile, sincerely, in the wind and rain I spent a happy childhood.

--这，是我的第一笔财富。

--This is my first fortune.

二

Two

时间老人慢慢地老去，但他没有忘记把我的身体拉长，没有忘记将健康与智慧装入我的头脑。

The old man of time grew old slowly, but he didn't forget to lengthen my body and put health and wisdom into my mind.

我不再迷恋于夏天的风雨和冬天的冰雪，开始探寻书本里的奥秘，探寻人生的真谛，撷取奋斗的乐趣，体验成长的滋味。可是生活的风雨真有点让我站不住脚，伤心的时候，我真想趴下，永远不再站起。但我又怕时间老人那严慈的目光。于是，我就像一棵生长在狂风暴雨中的小树，虽左右摇摆但绝不倒下，一旦雨过天晴，我依然追求灿烂的阳光。

I am no longer infatuated with the wind and rain in summer and the ice and snow in winter. I began to explore the mysteries in books, the essence of life, the fun of struggle and the taste of growth. But the wind and rain of life really makes me unable to stand. When I am sad, I really want to lie down and never stand up again. But I'm afraid of the old man's kind eyes. Therefore, I am like a small tree growing in the storm. Although it swings left and right, it will never fall down. Once the rain is over and the sky is clear, I still pursue the bright sunshine.

于是，我又得到了第二笔财富--乐观、坚强、奋斗不息。

So, I got a second fortune -- optimism, firmness and endless struggle.

三

Three

我的时间终究会走到尽头，我所能带走的也只有一堆碳、氢、氧、氮的化合物。这也是我的第N+1笔财富。

My time will come to an end, and all I can take away is a pile of carbon, hydrogen, oxygen and nitrogen compounds. This is also my n + 1 fortune.

在第二次与第N+1次之间，我不知道将有什么，但我知道坎坷与痛苦将是大部分。上帝是公正的，他分给每一个人的财富也是公平的。一位哲人这样说道："上帝造物用了7天，他分给人的各种财富也将是7的倍数，其中有7的1次方次欢乐，7的7次方次痛苦，7的0次方次死亡……"面对上帝的赐与，我不会抛弃痛苦，逃避坎坷，因为那也是我的财富。有了这些坎坷与痛苦，我的人生才会真正丰富而充实！

Between the second and the N + 1, I don't know what will happen, but I know that the bumps and pains will be the majority. God is just, and the wealth he gives to everyone is fair. A philosopher said: "it took seven days for God to create things, and the wealth he distributed to people will be multiple of seven, including seven times of joy, seven times of pain, seven times of death." &In the face of God's giving, I will not abandon the pain and avoid the bumps, because that is also my wealth. With these ups and downs and pain, my life will be really rich and full!

曾经，有一笔可观的财富摆在我面前，我珍惜了，并感谢了生活，于是财富滚滚而来：一元钱可以买天下所有的商品；一本书可阅遍精神世界；一辈子可以享受生活……

Once upon a time, there was a considerable wealth in front of me. I cherished it and thanked life, so the wealth rolled in: one yuan can buy all the goods in the world; one book can read all the spiritual world; one lifetime can enjoy life

【名师点评】本文紧紧围绕"财富"展开联想，表达了作者把微笑和真诚地对待生活，乐观坚强地奋斗不息作为"我"的财富的深刻立意。文章以"断想"的形式布局谋篇，开启自如；小标题的结构方式使全文首尾呼应，行文严谨。无论是对往事的回顾还是对未来的展望，本文都做到了开放与限制的统一，不愧是考场作文中的佳作。

[comments on famous teachers] this paper closely revolves around & quot; wealth & quot; to express the author's deep intention of treating life with a smile and sincerity, and striving with optimism and firmness as the wealth of & quot; me & quot. The article is arranged in the form of & quot; imagination & quot;, opening freely; the structure of the subtitle makes the full text echo at the beginning and end, and the writing is rigorous. Whether it is a review of the past or a prospect of the future, this paper has achieved the unity of openness and restriction, and is worthy of being a good composition in the examination room.