我的家乡－温州，是个美丽而富饶的地方。那里有各种各样的风味小吃，我最喜欢的是馄饨。也许你会觉得，馄饨都是一样，有什么特别，如果你这样想，那就错了，我们家乡的馄饨可是远近驰名的“色、香、味”俱全。
Wenzhou, my hometown, is a beautiful and rich place. There are all kinds of snacks there. My favorite is wonton. Maybe you will think that wonton is the same. What's special? If you think so, it's wrong. Our hometown's wonton is famous for its "color, fragrance and taste".
我们家乡的馄饨，它的皮似乎比纸还薄，比玻璃还要透明，在皮上简直可以透出馅儿来。在一张皮里包上干贝、瘦肉、葱花，一看，晶莹透亮的皮里呈现出“朵朵鲜花”，小巧玲珑，煞是好看。还没有尝上一口，这外形就已经使人馋涎欲滴了。这馄饨不仅外形美，味道更美。一碗馄饨在你面前一掠过，一阵香气扑鼻而来，深深地吸一口气，就能让人情不自禁地说：“真香啊！”舀起一个馄饨，就能使人不由自主地把它放进嘴里，嚼着嚼着，一股美味直入肺腑。再舀起馄饨汤，漂浮着绿油油的葱花，紫色的榨菜，还有红彤彤的虾米，组成了一幅美景图。喝到嘴里，一勺鲜美的汁水流入喉咙，让人感到神清气爽。
The skin of wonton in our hometown seems to be thinner than paper and more transparent than glass. It can show stuffing on the skin. In a skin wrapped with scallops, lean meat, scallions, a look, crystal clear skin presents "flowers", small and exquisite, very good-looking. Before I tasted it, the shape was already mouth watering. This wonton is not only beautiful in appearance, but also more delicious in taste. When a bowl of wonton passes in front of you, a smell comes from your nose. Take a deep breath, and you can't help but say, "it's delicious!" Scoop up a wonton, can make people involuntarily put it into their mouth, chew it, a delicious straight into the heart. Then scoop up wonton soup, floating with green onion, purple mustard, and red shrimp, forming a beautiful picture. Drink into the mouth, a spoonful of delicious juice into the throat, people feel refreshed.
当你来到我的家乡时，走在街上，看看一家家馄饨店，哪家不是人来人往。有的人一边吃一边赞不绝口，有的人甚至狼吞虎咽起来，还有的人不小心把馄饨汤溅到了自己的身上。一些人吃饱了还不满足，还要打包，有的买回去孝敬老人，有的买会去给孩子吃，还有的特地从外地跑来买给朋友吃。
When you come to my hometown, walk on the street and look at a wonton restaurant. It's not crowded. Some people are full of praise while eating, some even gobble it up, others accidentally spill wonton soup on themselves. Some people are not satisfied with their food, but they have to pack up. Some buy it back to show respect to the elderly, some buy it for their children, and some come from other places to buy it for their friends.
啊！我爱家乡的馄饨。家乡的馄饨不仅味道好，而且外形美观，年轻人爱吃，小孩子，老人更爱吃。如果你来到了我的家乡，那一定要尝一尝馄饨，这馄饨一定会使你流连忘返。
Ah! I love wonton in my hometown. Wonton in my hometown not only tastes good, but also looks beautiful. Young people like it, young children and old people like it more. If you come to my hometown, you must have a taste of wonton, which will make you linger.
点评：
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1.此篇作品是一篇难得的佳作，作者不用一汤一面即可做出如此“可口”家乡馄饨，让人不得不信服原来馄饨真的是如此美味。
1. This work is a rare masterpiece. The author can make such a "delicious" hometown wonton without one side of soup, which makes people believe that the original wonton is so delicious.
2.文章介绍了馄饨的“色、香、味”，对原料、形态、色泽的描写细致准确，而对于它的美味则主要通过顾客的种种生动表现反衬出来，真可谓是“外形美观，老少咸宜”，难怪小作者会对它情有独钟。
2. The article introduces the "color, fragrance and taste" of wonton, and describes the raw materials, shape and color carefully and accurately. The delicacy of wonton is mainly reflected by the vivid performance of customers. It is really "beautiful appearance, suitable for the young and the old". No wonder that the young author will have a special interest in it.
3.语言生动优美，自然流畅，语汇丰富，条理清晰，中心明确。
3. Vivid and beautiful language, natural and fluent, rich vocabulary, clear organization and clear center.
