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我家乡的风味小吃有很多，如盒子糕、锅边糊、豆腐丸、臭豆腐......但我最喜欢的要数臭豆腐了。

There are many snacks in my hometown, such as box cakes, pot paste, tofu balls, stinky tofu... But my favorite one is stinky tofu.

在浦城的大街小巷不时传来一阵阵诱人的叫卖声：“快来买了，正宗的臭豆腐，又香又便宜！”提起臭豆腐，我们浦城人谁都会竖起大拇指的。

From time to time in the streets and alleys of Pucheng, there comes a sound of tempting selling: "come and buy it, authentic stinky tofu, fragrant and cheap!" When it comes to stinky tofu, everyone in Pucheng will give a thumbs up.

臭豆腐闻起来臭，吃起来香。今天和妈妈一起上街，我又央求妈妈给我买臭豆腐。只见摊主把一块块一寸见方的臭豆腐从“卤水”里捞出来，再放到油锅内炸。这时，就能听到一阵阵“吱吱”的响声。大约炸了两分钟，一串串臭豆腐便熟了，摊主利落地把一串串臭豆腐便可以吃了。我拿着臭豆腐放在嘴边轻轻地咬一口，“哇，真好吃！”我情不自禁地叫道。我狼吞虎咽地吃着臭豆腐，好像山珍海味也比不上似的。不知不觉地，一串臭豆腐便下肚了，这时，我才觉得嘴巴好辣，辣得我“呼哧、呼哧”地喘着粗气。旁边的妈妈笑嘻嘻地对我说：“还要不要来一串呀？”我搔着头，不好意思地回答道：“想是想，可惜肚子太小了。”妈妈听了，指着我的头说：“你这只小馋猫。”说完，我们都哈哈大笑起来。

Stinky tofu smells stinky and tastes delicious. Today, I went to the street with my mother and begged her to buy me stinky tofu. I saw the stall owner pull out the stinky tofu from the "brine" and fry it in the oil pan. At this time, you can hear a "squeak" sound. About two minutes of frying, a string of stinky tofu will be cooked, and the stall owner will eat a string of stinky tofu. I took the stinky tofu and put it on my mouth and bit it gently, "Wow, it's delicious!" I can't help shouting. I devour stinky tofu, as if the delicacies of the mountains and seafood are not comparable. Unconsciously, a string of stinky tofu will be eaten. At this time, I feel that my mouth is very spicy, which makes me breathe heavily. The mother next to me said with a smile, "don't you want to have a bunch?" I scratched my head and replied sheepishly, "I think so, but my stomach is too small." Mom listened and pointed to my head and said, "you greedy little cat." After that, we all laughed.

我爱家乡的各种风味小吃，但我更爱家乡的臭豆腐。

I love all kinds of snacks in my hometown, but I prefer stinky tofu in my hometown.

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1.小作者首先概括地介绍了家乡的风味小吃，然后突出了对臭豆腐的喜爱，并通过沿街的叫卖声及家乡人的推崇从侧面体现出臭豆腐是一种深受人们喜欢的美食。接下来，小作者详尽介绍了臭豆腐的烹制及口感，具体、生动地描绘，加上小作者真实的体验，使人读后感同身受。结尾再次突出中心思想。

1. The author first introduces the flavor snacks in his hometown, and then highlights his love for stinky tofu. Through the peddling along the street and the praise of his hometown people, he shows that stinky tofu is a kind of delicious food that people like very much. Next, the author introduces the cooking and taste of stinky tofu in detail, describes it concretely and vividly, and the author's real experience makes people feel the same after reading. At the end, the central idea is highlighted again.

2.文章前后呼应，重点突出，详略得当，层次分明，条理清晰。

2. The article echoes back and forth, with outstanding emphasis, proper details, clear layers and clear organization.

3.文章语言生动形象，充满童趣，洋溢着对家乡的热爱之情。

3. The language of the article is vivid, full of children's interest and full of love for hometown.