秋天是美好的，秋天是收获的季节，天平山的桔子，露出灿烂的笑脸，正期盼着我们的到来……
XX年11月12日，我们来到桔园，看到桔树上挂满了果实，黄澄澄的，十分惹人喜爱；有一些还没有完全成熟，果皮是绿色的。远远望去，挂在树枝上的桔子有的高，有的低，像一个个小铃铛；又像一个个小灯笼，漂亮极了。当我采桔子的时候，小桔子似乎不愿忘记大树妈妈的养育之恩，牢牢地挂在树枝上，我必须用力才能把它们摘下来。桔子又大又圆，皮非常薄，把一瓣桔子送入口中，像蜜一样甜，微微的带有一点儿酸味。我由衷（zhōng）地感到苏州真是好山、好水、好风光！
通过这次秋游，让我体验到了丰收的喜悦和劳动的艰辛。
autumn is lovely. it is the season of harvest. there are many oranges on the trees on tianping mountain. they were smiling at our arrival.
on the 12th november, XX, we came to the orange garden and saw many lovely oranges. some of them were not fully ripe, so their peels were green like small bells or lanterns. how beautiful! when i picked oranges, i needed to use force to pull them down. they seemed as if they were not willing to leave their mums—the orange trees. the oranges were big and round. their peels were very thin. we tasted a section of the orange. it was sweet and a slightly sour. i feel that suzhou has really good mountains, good water and good scenery!
through this autumn outing, i experienced the happiness of harvest and the hardness of labor.
