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雅思写作逻辑问题最为致命 鸡同鸭讲的滋味

雅思写作的文章是一个有机整体，从开篇，到主体论述部分，到结尾，你的观点在最显眼的段落头部位置反复出现，且一以贯之，从一而终，这样形成逻辑上的自洽，考官也是最容易快速了解你的观点思路。减少他们的阅读障碍，就是为自己的雅思写作加分。

可现实中，烤鸭的写作问题有很多，主要集中在以下几个方面：1.逻辑混乱 2.过于主观 3.中式思维/表达 4.过分注重用词。大体上来说，雅思写作逻辑混乱的问题是最多的。逻辑问题有三种，通篇逻辑，段落之间，段落之中。

大家都很喜欢一条一条摆原因。Firstly，secondly...然后后面至于这个ly后面是什么就不管了，一顿胡扯。也不管这段落与段落之间的衔接是否自然，反正都有什么ly给打头阵。

事实上，中西方的思维总是存在差异，很多时候考官老师们都不懂考生在说什么。考官很困惑，这个例子和这个有关系吗?为什么前面在说A，后面突然B了?和结论什么关系?

很多同学都很喜欢写中立观点“A不错，但不够好”，这虽然看起来很客观，但实际上对逻辑的要求非常高，要怎样去组织语言，组织相应的论据论点，非常考验人。有同学想说A事件要瑕疵互见，但是写着写着就乱七八糟，东一块西一块，不知道在讲点什么了。更有厉害的索性冗长的2000来词，讲了个空话。所以建议刚上手的同学，还是选择一边倒，站定脚跟不放松。即便是真的要写中立观点，实际上也都在A和B之间有所偏好。

此外，现在很多人会要求练writing的时候先写提纲。于是同学们们就只写一个观点，然后后面的例子乱用，或者根本没有弄清楚什么是例子。事实上，这种展开，可以是实例，也可以是虚拟的假设。实例中往往分自己的经验和他人的经验。那么怎样的例子有说服力呢?

一般来说是：名人名事(知名度大)>众人众事(样本大)>自己经历(体会深)>他人经历。假设往往不够有说服力，因为很难涉及到每一个变量。但是假设在有的时候可以行得通，就是在很难说清楚步骤和因果关系的时候，用一个假设场景来推导会让文章变得浅显易懂。

所以建议，在刚开始上手写作文的时候，先不要给自己30分钟的压力，先列出提纲(10分钟)，再用30分钟去写，看能写多少。

记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的观点，不要是和观点打擦边球的。

比如，一位烤鸭的文章，她的大观点是电脑对学生来说是有益的，小观点是，可以查到很多资料，然后例子是可以用Google查到很多资料，很快捷。OK，乍一看这个没有问题。但是实际上问题大了，用Google查到很多资料，是因为电脑还是internet?这很容易就偏题了，变成internet对学生来说是有益的。例子一定要从论点出发，再回到论点。不要将你的论点发散，后果很可能就是越写越跑题。所以每次写好一篇文章，都看看，论据里的keywords是不是和论点里的keywords一样，论点里的keywords又是不是和题目里的keywords一样。你的keywords可以比大题里的keywords更加narrow，但是千万不要更加广泛。

最后说的雅思写作逻辑问题，是段落中逻辑比较容易错的。一般是对接续词的运用。如However，thus，therefore，他们决定了上下文之间的关系，但是很多读起来就很奇怪，两者完全不是转折的关系，用了however，就会让人觉得有些无厘头。或者就是上下文之间完全没有逻辑联系，就是两个单句凑在了一起。还是这句话，一篇文章和流水似的，不能断。中间断了那就不叫好文章了。即使前一句与有一句没有接续词，它们在逻辑上也是要能承接的。

其实写作逻辑上的错误有时很难完全克服，很多大牛的著作里也经常会被后人挖出逻辑错误。但是我们至少要克服这些一眼就能看出的逻辑错误，才能让雅思写作文章看起来更加舒适。

g类雅思书信小作文范文 请求信：写给驴友索要照片

雅思g类书信小作文话题

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

你同一朋友一起出去玩了一趟，拍了不少照片。有些照片在朋友那里，你想要。

ask your friend to send you one of the photographs

explain why you need that particular photograph

and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.

雅思g类书信小作文范文：

Dear Jane,

I hope you've recovered from the trip, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did!

I'm just writing to ask whether you could send me a copy of the photo you took of the sun setting over the mountains on the last evening. I think you took some photos of me with the sunset in the background, but there should be one that just shows the sunset.

The reason I'm after that particular photo is that I think it would look great as the screen saver on my laptop. I'm fed up with the stock image that I've got at the moment, and I was hoping to change it for something really stunning that I had taken myself.

I did take a fantastic picture of the sunset, but somehow managed to delete it on my camera. It would be great if you could email a copy to me if you have it.

Speak soon

Jim(150)

g类雅思书信小作文范文 感谢信：写给海外朋友

雅思g类书信小作文话题

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter：

上月，你在海外和一群朋友在一起度假。你刚刚收到了他们寄给你的假日照片。

thank them for the photos and for the holiday

explain why you didn’t write earlier

雅思g类书信小作文参考范文

Dear John and Jane,

I hope this letter finds you well. I’m just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you sent.

The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were fantastic hosts, and I couldn’t have asked for better guides to show me around.

Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was!

Anyway, I’m back to normal now and I’ve handed in all of my assignments. In fact, now that I’m free, why don’t you both come and stay? There’s a spare room here, so you’re welcome to use it whenever you like.

Hope to see you soon,

Peter

(158 words)

g类雅思书信小作文范文 道歉信：爽约朋友生日会

雅思g类书信小作文话题

One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

朋友的生日会你过错了，并且没有事先告知。写信道歉并解释。

apologise for missing the birthday celebration

explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend

and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.

雅思g类书信小作文范文

Dear Mark,

I hope you're well and that you had a fantastic time on your birthday.

I'm so sorry that I wasn't there to celebrate with you, and for not letting you know beforehand that I wouldn't be able to come. I feel terrible that I haven't found the time to contact you until now.

The truth is that I've been under a lot of stress at work recently. I was in danger of losing my job if I didn't meet a sales target, so I haven't been able to think about anything else over the last few weeks. This is why I couldn't be at your party, and why I didn't call to tell you I wouldn't be there.

I really hope you'll forgive me for being so thoughtless, and I hope you'll let me make it up to you. By way of an apology, I've bought tickets for us both to go to the football next Saturday; I hope you'll come.

Speak to you soon,

Mike(168)