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托福写作文章架构对于写作整体的影响很大，所以大家在平时写作练习中应该了解如何去提升写作的架构。下面小编就和大家分享托福写作文章架构如何规划更合理，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作文章架构如何规划更合理?开头中间和结尾写法汇总

托福写作文章架构提升之 开头段写法

开头段主要用以下几种方法来组织，即背景法(Background)， 争议法(Controversy)， 提问法(Question)，故事法(Story)和引言法(Quotation)。

以背景法为例。背景法一般会提出一种普遍的或值得关注的现象作为背景或者是由远到近，由大到小地谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景。

背景法开头段的结构通常如下：

背景(1-3 句)+论题+反方观点+(反方理由)+过度+(正方观点)+作者的观点+作者的理由。

以 2007 年 8 月 11 日的独立写作试题为例：Technology makes people's lives more complicated.

题目涉及到了现今社会比较热门的话题---科技。这样，我们就可以以这种社会比较关注的现 象作为我们作文的开头背景。

因此这个题目的首段就可以这样开始：Technology has had tremendous impacts on every aspect of modern life. However, people are having conflicting opinions about whether it has made people's lives more complicated or not. I believe technology has by and large made our lives more convenient。

第一 句话就是一句紧贴社会的背景，这样写不但很容易打开考生自己的思路，抓住作文的焦点， 还能引起考官的共鸣。

托福写作文章架构之 中间段落写法

中间段落的文章结构通常如下：Transitional words + topic sentence + development。

如果考生在平时能熟练运用这样的一个结构来展开作文，那么考场上就会凭借这份思维定势 来帮助自己抓住每一分。中间三个段落都可以套用这种模式。

Transitional words 主要有以下三种，

即表顺序：firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least);

表并列：besides, in addition;

表对比：in contrast, in comparison。

这些衔接词会让文章看起来脉络清晰，组织严密， 也就做到了评分标准的 “well-organized”一条。

主题句，顾名思义，向考官展示的是考生作文的主要意旨所以它在中间段落中的作用是 至关重要的。

通常主题句应该注意一下几点：

1.主题句必须是陈述句。有的考生想在写作中创新，于是采用反问句或者其他看似多样化的题目，然而这种多样性带来的后果是给考官观点不明确的印象，很自然地会影响到分数。

2.必须表明观点。如果考生把一句无关痛痒的话放在主题句的位置上，很显然无法表明 自身观点。

比如像“今天是晴天”这样的话没有表明观点;然而“今天是个好天气”就包含 一种感情色彩在里面，给人一种立场明确的感觉。

考生应该切记：没有反驳余地的就不可以作为主题句。

3.态度必须坚决。但是不能极端。

4.每段必须有主题句，理论上讲没有主题句是可以的，但是考场上不可以，没有主题就会浪费考官的时间去帮你总结主题，然而繁忙的考官是不会那么善良地去分析你的题目来抓 取你的观点的。

至于中间段落的展开(development)则需要大家学习积累一些常用的段落展开方法，

比如举例法、比较法、因果法等。

托福写作文章架构之 结尾段写作方法

文章结尾段落虽然并不像开头和中间段落那样重要，然而没有结尾的文章是不完整的， 不符合基本写作要求。

所以考生在考场上一定要在结尾处再次声明自己观点(restatement)， 或者提出新的希望，或者提出解决问题的方案，从而让考官有一种善始善终的良好印象。

托福写作架构优化需要我们努力提升文章的开头、中间段落和结尾部分。如果大家在备考中能够把握好这几部分的写作，那么托福写作文章架构也会得到提升。

托福写作：户外旅游还是室内参观

托福写作题目：

Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福写作范文：

When people travel to new places, they often choose the local museums as a must-see place. Sometimes the museums are even more attractive than the most famous place of interest. This phenomenon can be easily explained if the function of museums is taken into account. As we have known, museums can help us know the history, the customs and the most representative products of that place.

Different place has different history. And the most convenient way to know the history is to visit the local museum. Last year when I traveled to Xi‘an，an old city，I went to the history museum to explore the course of its development. With the background knowledge provided by the museum，I found that it was easier for me to understand the city. So the museum can clear away the barriers between tourists and the city by making them familiar with its history. To a tourist，the mostattractive part of a place is usually its customs，which can be demonstrated by the local museum.

In the Beijing custom museum，the real life of typical Beijingers is vividly shown. A tourist can satisfy his curiosity by knowing the origin and characteristics of the quart-yard，the most classical building in Beijing. With the help of museums，tourists can have a deeper understanding of the life of local people.

Every place has its own representative products，which are usually handcrafts. Tourists can have the access to a wonderful show of these handcrafts in the local museum. For example，in Jingde town，the most famous pottery-making place in China，tourists can be excited by the beautiful pottery products and the complicated making process exhibited in the pottery museum. It will be a pity for a tourist not to experience the wonderful show of the local products in the museum.

In a word，museums serve as a bridge between tourists and the place they travel to. That is why people are so eager to visit museums when they travel to new places.

托福写作：模板句子

The paradox of our time in history is that we have taller buildings, but shorter tempers; wider freeways, but narrower viewpoints; we spend more, but have less; we buy more but enjoy less.

我们这个时代在历史上的说法就是我们拥有更高的建筑，但是有更暴的脾气;我们拥有更宽阔的高速公路，却有更狭隘的观点;我们花费得更多，拥有得却更少;我们购买得更多却享受得更少。

We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less sense; more knowledge, but less judgment; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness.

我们的房子越来越大，家庭却越来越小;便利越来越多，时间却越来越少;学位越来越多，感觉却越来越少;知识越来越多，观点却越来越少;专家越来越多，问题也越来越多;药物越来越多，健康却越来越少。

We drink too much, spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry too quickly, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom.

我们喝得太多，花钱大手大脚，笑得太少，开车太快，易怒，熬夜，赖床，书读得越来越少，电视看得越来越多，却很少向上帝祈祷。

We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate too often. We’ve learned how to make a living, but not a life; we’ve added years to life, not life to years.

我们常常夸夸其谈，却很少付出爱心，且常常心中充满了仇恨。我们学会了如何谋生，而不知如何生活。我们延长了生命的期限，而不是生活的期限。

We’ve been all the way to the moon and back, but have trouble crossing the street to meet the new neighbor. We’ve conquered outer space, but not inner space; we’ve done larger things, but not better things.

我们登上了月球，并成功返回，却不能穿过街道去拜访新邻居。我们已经征服了太空，却征服不了自己的内心;我们的事业越做越大，但质量却没有提高。

We’ve cleaned up the air, but polluted the soul; we’ve split the atom, but not our prejudice. We write more, but learn less; we plan more, but accomplish less.

我们清洁了空气，却污染了灵魂;我们分离了原子，却无法驱除我们的偏见;我们写得更多，学到的却更少;我们的计划更多，完成的却更少。

We’ve learned to rush, but not to wait; we have higher incomes, but, lower morals.

我们学会了奔跑，却忘记了如何等待;我们的收入越来越高，道德水平却越来越低。

We build more computers to hold more information to produce more copies than ever, but have less communication; we’ve become long on quantity, but short on quality.

我们制造了更多的计算机来存储更多的信息，制造了最多的副本，却减少了交流;我们开始渴望数量，但忽视了质量。

These are the days of two incomes, but more divorce; of fancier houses, but more broken homes.

这个时代有双收入，但也有了更高的离婚率;有更华丽的房屋，却有更多破碎的家庭。

These are the days of quick trips, disposable diapers, throw away morality, one night stands, overweight bodies, and pills that do everything from cheer, to quiet, to kill. Where are we heading...?

这个时代有了快速旅游，免洗尿布，却抛弃了道德、一夜情、超重的身体，以及可以从快乐中走向静止和自杀的药物。我们将走向何方……?

If we die tomorrow, the company that we are working for could easily replace us in a matter of days. But the family we left behind will feel the loss for the rest of their lives.

如果我们明天就死掉，我们为之工作的公司可能会在一天内很轻易地找人代替我们的位置。但是当我们离开家人后，他们的余生将会在失落中度过。

And come to think of it, we pour ourselves more into work than to our family an unwise investment indeed.

考虑一下吧，我们将自己的时间更多地投入到工作中，而放弃与家人在一起的时光，实在并非明智之举。

So what is the morale of the story?

那么这则故事的主旨是什么呢?

Don’t work too hard... and you know what’s the full word of family?

不要工作得太辛苦，你知道家的全称吗?

FAMILY = (F)ATHER (A)ND (M)OTHER, (I) (L)OVE (Y)OU.