托福写作实例讲解如何找独立写作的分论点

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托福写作中把握好这些高分原则

1.动笔之前，把自己对作文题的理解好好整理一下.把思路组织好，写出简略提纲。提示提纲不宜花过多时l司，以防写正文时无足够的时间‘正常情况下，写提纲的时间应限制在5分钟内。

2.弄清考题要求.使用适合的文体(如记叙文，描写文、说明文和议论文)，尽量圆满回答考题要求回答的问题。

3.写好开头段和结尾段。开头一段应说吸短文中心思想，结尾段总结全文，达到全文的统一。开头段一般限制在3-4句话内，结尾段也不应超过此限度.

4.正文是根据文章主题作逐点详细阐述，一般二、三段为宜、不可太长，否则在限定时间内无法做完。每段长短不宜强求。但长一般不应超过10句话。短的一般是3-4句话。’

5.正确使用语法、词汇和拼法。使用自己有把握的语法。词汇和句法结构:宁可写得简单、明了、正确，绝不超越自己的写作能力去写些复杂的、自己并无把握的、甚至自己意识不到的有错误的句子。

6. 要说明某个问题时，。应使用具体的事例或具体材料，不可使用太多概活性太强的、空洞无物的句子

托福写作：题库范文附思路解析

1. Why movies are so popular all over the world?

Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

『分析』

人们喜欢电影是因为：

电影能够满足人们的幻想

电影能使满足人们的好奇(了解其他国家的很多事情[183])

电影是最经济的娱乐手段(金钱上、精力上[127])

参见：范文

相关题目：[127]、[183]

『范文』

One of the most popular pastimes today is movie-going. With what started as moving-picture shows has dramatically developed into an industry that spends millions upon millions of dollars while still turning a gigantic profit.

Movies are so popular because they are the most fascinating and easiest escape means from increasing pressure, which comes from family, school, working place, society, and so many other directions. Combined with acoustic and visual effect, movies are definitely more appealing for audiences who have exhausted themselves in the real world than are those printed novels. It must have been much easier to see a movie than to read a novel, since all the audience should do is simply to sit there in a soft chair in the dark about 150 minutes. Captured, involved, the audience in a movie theater will forget everything but the story in action on the screen.

Movies have magic power to let people immerse themselves in fiction. The point is that almost everyone long for the power of snapping his/her fingers and seeing his/her wishes and dreams instantly granted. Everyone long for eternity of love, many idealize about it but now in the theater it's time to "feel" it. Every move the character makes, every breath the character takes, all seem to happen around, and clearly sensible. On the screen, no entire life needed, movies illustrate all aspects of love we can imagine: all aspects of love, from the mushy warm and fuzzy feelings we feel with our children and companion animals, to platonic love we have with friends and acquaintances, to the romantic soul mate kind of love, to the agape kind of unconditional love, it's the full gamut. Dramas are created in order for us to play out different sides of ourselves. In short, movies are so popular because many can escape into the world of fantasy and live vicariously through the characters and in doing so, work out different feelings and emotions that they may not have the opportunity to do in their "normal" lives.

2. Land In your country: needs to be left in its natural condition or needs to be

developed?

In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

注意，根据题目要求，一定要结合我们国家的情况去说。中国人口密度很高，所以，我们选择后者应该更

容易写一些。

中国解决住房的需求(要地，也要资本)

发展工业能够解决资本问题

发展工业，也能解决失业问题，进一步繁荣经济

『范文』

With a population accounting nearly for one quarter of the world population, my country, China, has been suffering from serious loss of arable land, which now hardly accounts for 7% of overall arable land of the world.

Yet some people simply do not realize that land loss is so crucial that we one day might incapable of averting that catastrophe if we now close our eyes to it.

Industrial development without careful consideration regarding land preservation has caused problems more serious than people can ever imagine. Take the great Three Gorges dam for example, which will be put into operation next year. While the country benefits from gargantuan potential of electricity generation, we have to face up to various environmental conservation issues concerning geological and ecological environment along both river sides and whole upper reaches. The professional designers of the great dam now have to work out a practical way to prevent and remedy pollution effectively, which has already been the focus of world attention.

After the entrance of the WTO, industry development is more and more important for our country, yet we should be careful about the pollution which is inevitably caused by industry. Recent surveys have shown that refuse treatment engineering is not well financed in China, while attentions are drawn to those much more obvious achievements. Industrial pollution accidents occur far more frequently in our still developing country than in other more advanced countries. Urban population also produce astoundingly large amount of pollution. Today the alleged white pollution is creeping all over the country—people throw plastic bags, films everywhere, never feeling anything wrong.

We no doubt need land either for natural condition or for industry, and it seems we need more if possible.

Nevertheless, we live in a world where everything has its cost, and some day in the future, I believe, we will inescapably pay for what we have ignored.

托福写作：题库范文附思路解析

1. Should pets be treated as family members?

Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

与宠物非常亲密，有好处，也有不好的地方。

好处：不寂寞;每个人都有爱心;闲暇时间有心理寄托(spiritual/psychological sustenance);

缺点：人会变得孤僻;脏;宠物可能传染病毒

『范文』

Throughout history, animals have always been great companions to man. In today's society, we frequently treat our pets as members of family, nursing them when they are sick, and playing with them when they are well. I believe that the relationships that people have with their pets are healthy for many reasons.

Firstly, animals provide companionship for people who are too old to maintain regular friendships. It is most common for one spouse to outlive the other. Frequently, the surviving spouse does not remarry, and eventually, all his or her friends die. When one is elderly, it is difficult to make new friends. In this type of situation, having a pet as a companion is greatly preferable to spending all of one's time alone. While a pet cannot speak, it can understand its master's emotions, and usually responds accordingly.

Secondly, animals have been proven to reduce their master's stress. This is probably because an animal is always happy to see its master, and gives the master unconditional love. As long as the master is kind to his/her pet, the pet will be devoted and faithful. A pet also provides a friendly face after a stressful day. For example, I have a pet dog. After taking an exam, the only thing I want to do is go home and play with my dog. He always brings me much needed cheer and happiness.

Lastly, having an animal can prepare a young couple for having children. A young animal is very difficult to take care of. Let us take the example of a puppy. One can never leave a puppy by itself. A puppy must be constantly taken care of; he must be toilet-trained and disciplined. Raising an animal to be happy and sociable is very much like raising a child to possess the same attributes. While a puppy is obviously easier to take care of than a child, it can show the prospective parents where some of the difficulties will lie when raising a baby.

In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy. Having a pet can reduce loneliness, stress, and prepare one for the huge experience of having a child. Pets are often referred to as man's best friend, and for good reason.