托福写作提升八大技巧

很多托福新手考生因为缺乏对写作评分标准的认识，很容易被一些谬论观点误导而采取了错误的备考方法，从而导致作文成绩不升反降。下面小编就和大家分享托福写作高分常见4大问题汇总解答,希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作高分常见4大问题汇总解答

托福写作备考刷机经才能拿高分?

这个观点在考生当中是比较有市场的，由于托福机经的热门，很多人把它看成了无所不能的备考材料，总觉得只要考前刷一遍机经自然能够拿到高分，作文当然也不例外。然而事实并非如此，托福作文机经中虽然包含了大量作文题目，而这些作文题目也的确是历年考试中出现过的考题，但这并不代表着官方不会出新的作文题目来考大家。考生如果把机经当成作文提分的保障，备考练笔只练机经上的题目，那么一旦考试中没能命中机经，后果就比较严重了。小编始终认为托福写作考察的是基本功，审题能力，理解能力，语言组织能力等等，这些才是帮助大家拿到理想成绩的关键所在。当然刷机经的确是有效的提分方式，但大家也不能把机经直接和高分划上等号，这样的看法是有所偏颇的。

素材充分例子多用作文就能提分?

这个说法也是存在问题的。首先托福考试作文分成两篇，综合写作本身不需要考生提出观点，大家只要把听力和阅读材料中讲述的内容汇总写出来即可，因此根本就不需要使用任何素材。而独立写作的题材虽然是立论，但关键还是在于论而非举例上，论据素材例子说到底只是服务于观点，其作用是让论述更有说服力，论据素材用得好固然有助提分，但用不好却也容易反而导致扣分。所以说往写作中强行加入素材论据反而是帮倒忙，素材例子用得多就能提升作文成绩其实是无稽之谈。

字数越多作文分数越高?

作文写得字数越多得分越高的想法其实很多考生都有。但实际上这种观点并非完全正确。ETS对于托福作文的字数虽然给出了规定，综合写作150-225字，独立写作300字以上，但也同时说明了只是推荐字数，并非绝对性的限制。在小编看来，只要能保证自己的文章可以把要说的内容说清楚，比如综合写作把听力和阅读素材里给出的信息都总结并清晰地表达出来，把独立写作中自己提出的观点逻辑自洽结构流畅语言通顺地写清楚，这样的文章就已经能满足托福写作的要求了，被名为字数的枷锁限制住一定要写到多少字或者强行堆砌无用文字提升篇幅的做法都是不合理的。作文高分和文章字数之间不存在必然联系。

多用高级词汇复杂长难句作文成绩更好?

会有这种想法的考生其实多少暴露出了一点底气不足的问题。这些同学总觉得作文高分一定要多用高级词汇和复杂的句式，这样才能体现水平。然而托福官方的看法实际上并非如此。托福作文中对于考生的写作能力在遣词造句方面的要求主要集中在独立写作部分，以5分满分的评分标准为例，官方给出的要求是这样的：

Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.

大家可以看到，其实官方根本就没说一定要用复杂句式和词汇，syntactic variety说的是句式要有多样性，appropriate word choice and idiomaticity说的是词汇短语要用对，然后哪怕有些小的词汇语法错误也是可以接受的。满分要求都是这样，可想而知官方对作文在词句方面其实要求并不是特别高。句式多样大家用一些短句搭配各种简单的从句就能够满足要求，词汇也只要尽量避免重复不要用错词就可以了。那些强行提高难度的词句要求完全是某些考生自己加戏脑补出来的要求，大家可千万不要当真了。

综上所述，考生想要在托福写作中收获高分，对高分的认知就必须端正。一些常见的错误看法观点小编已经为大家逐一盘点和分析过了，希望大家能够明确备考方向和努力目标，练好写作技能拿到理想分数。

托福考试作文范例：有钱就算成功吗

托福考试作文题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福考试作文参考分析：

不同意此观点。金钱不是衡量成功的唯一的标准，成功的定义更应该基于社会贡献。从多角度论证金钱不是万能的。

托福考试作文范文：

Since people's criteria for success differ, there is much debate over whether only those who make a lot of money are successful. As far as I am concerned, in today's society that stresses on individual achievement, money provides the best evaluation of one's accomplishment.

To begin with, as a standardized measurement used for comparing values, money is objective rather than subjective, so it is considered an authentic reflection of one's achievement. As different people hold different understandings of success, assessing the amount of one's earnings has become universally accepted as a rule to measure one's success. Each year, Fortune Magazine publishes a special issue to rank the top 100 most successful people throughout the world according to their yearly income, because there are no other methods to rely on.

In addition, the amount of money one makes is the consequence of one's hard work and talent. To deny the accomplishment wealth brings is equal to deny the sources from which it springs. In the past, I only believed in spiritual values and then leapt rashly to the conclusion that the best thing in life involves no money at all. It is my uncle who showed me the significance of money and changed my opinion. He told me he respected money and made it a goal to strive for in his way towards success. Because he would have to pay a price for it in terms of time, thought and energy. Gradually, I came to realize it is the mental and physical labor he devotes in the process of making money that paves his way for self-accomplishment, and thus deserves appreciation and respect.

Finally, money is the most powerful possession in one's lifetime. As everyone knows, success is the ability to do whatever one wants to and to be satisfied with oneself. There is hardly anything that can be done without a certain amount of money. Indeed, with money, one can meet his or her material demand in life, such as taking effective medicines, living in magnificent houses, eating various delicious food, and so on. Also, with money, one can do a lot of meaningful things to benefit others, such as donations to poor people. All these will not only satisfy one's need for personal fulfillment, but also add grandness to one's success.

In conclusion, money serves as a measurement of one's achievement. But we should keep in mind that only those who obtain money by hardworking and use it to benefit the society are really successful.

托福考试作文范例：是否所有学科的大学生都应该学习历史?

托福考试作文题目：

University students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.

学习任何学科的大学生都应该被要求学习历史课，是否认同?

(2013年9月29日 = 2009年6月13日)

思路拓展：

历史学习的利好：

1. 阅读本身就是快乐的，学习本身就是一种成长。阅读经典史书，无论是典故，传记，还是语录，都是一种开拓视野，丰富知识，增加文化底蕴的过程。

2. 很多精英，无论是文体明星，还是商业巨子，他们的成功的重要因素之一就是大学期间博览群书，钻研历史。学习历史不仅增强了他们的文化底蕴，更加教会他们以史为鉴，理性思考。换言之，他们不断借鉴史书，积累成功的方法，学习失败的经验。当他们走出校园，搏击商海，拓展事业的时候，从历史学习中汲取精神力量帮助他们避免犯类似的错误，危机中做出明智选择。

为何不学习历史：

我承认，有人也许对于我的立场持怀疑态度。

有人认为，大学所有专业的学生都被要求学习历史也许不可取，因为不是人人都对历史感兴趣，历史学习不一定对于每个专业的学生都有实际的利好。例如，对于植物学专业的学生而言，学习历史可能耽误时间，分散精力，因此，积累历史知识对于未来的就业可能影响不大。

但是，我想反驳的是：对于历史学习的兴趣是可以培养的，通过学习历史获得的精神乐趣，培养的辩证思维对于每个人的未来都是有利好的影响。

【基础语料库】

1. instill confidence into oneself

v灌输自信

解析：instill v灌输……

2. foster one’s rational thinking and critical thought

v培养理性思维和批判思维

3. get a clear perspective of oneself

v了解自己

4. make sound judgment on

v对于……做出理性的判断

解析：sound adj理性的;健康的

5. enhance one’s literacy

v增强一个人的读写能力

6. avoid making similar mistakes

v避免犯相似的错误

7. enlarge one’s scope of knowledge

v增加知识面

8. broaden one’s mental horizons

v拓宽视野

拓展： expand one’s mind v开拓视野(口语推荐)

9. exert a positive impact on the future

v对于未来有积极影响

10. learn the relevant experiences from the historical events

v从历史事件中学习相关经验

11. learn the methods of addressing the problems

v学习解决问题的方法

12. if one’s major is totally irrelevant to history

如果一个人的专业和历史完全无关

解析：such as botany or zoology 例如动物学和动物性

13. to learn history will distract one’s energy and waster one’s time

v学习历史会分散精力，浪费时间

14. take history as a mirror

v以史为鉴

15. foster one’s analytical, creative and rational thinking

v培养人的分析性思维，创造性思维和理性思维

点评：可以支持历史，文学，哲学等课程。

16. mature one’s thought

v成熟思想

17. reflect on oneself

v自我反思

18. deepen one’s insight into life

v 加深对于生活的洞察

解析：insight into = understanding about v对于……的洞察

19. brings about a great many benefits to one’s spiritual growth

v给人的精神成长带来很多利好

20. have nothing to do with our current life

v和我们当前的生活联系不大

解析：is irrelevant to v和……的关系不大

点评：让步段使用

【原创语料库】

1. People have been debating for many years whether or not the college students as a whole should be required to study history without reaching any consensus

人们在争议是否大学生应该被鼓励学习历史，没有达成共识。

2. All university students, regardless of their majors，are supposed to spend some time learning history-related courses.

每个大学生，无论学习何种专业，都应该花点时间学习和历史相关的课程。

3. College students of all fields ought to know some common sense about the past.

学习任何学科的大学生都应该对于过去有些基本常识。

4. The pleasure of acquiring history knowledge lies in the process of reading itself.

学习历史知识的乐趣在于阅读本身。

5. To travel in the ocean of history-related books， no matter what one reads such as stories, biographies or analects，is a good way to expand one’s mental horizons，enlarge one’s scope of knowledge and strengthen one’s cultural deposits.

阅读经典历书，无论是典故，传记，还是语录，都是一种开拓视野，丰富知识，增加文化底蕴的过程。

6. Examples from many fields could be quoted to justify my stand. A lot of social elites ranging from top stars to eminent entrepreneurs all take a keen interest in studying history-related courses and reading extensively, which conduces to their later achievements in personal career.

很多精英，无论是文体明星，还是商业巨子，他们的成功的重要因素之一就是大学期间，钻研历史, 博览群书。

7. The acquisition of history knowledge not only strengthens their cultural deposits, but also fosters their rational mode of thinking, for they have learnt to take history as a mirror.

学习历史不仅增强了他们的文化底蕴，更加教会他们以史为鉴，理性思考。

8. In other words, they constantly benefit form the past histories by means of learning successful figures and mirroring the experiences of failure.

换言之，他们不断借鉴史中,积累成功的方法，学习失败的经验。

解析：mirror = reflect v反思

9. After finishing university life, they dived into bossiness world or expanded personal career， what they spiritually gained from history learning helps them avoid committing blunders and make sound judgment.

当他们走出校园，搏击商海，拓展事业的时候，从历史学习中汲取精神力量帮助他们避免犯类似的错误，危机中做出明智选择。

10. Admittedly, some people might take skeptical attitude towards my standpoint.

我承认，有人也许对于我的立场持怀疑态度。

11. Someone might argue that it is not feasible to inspire students of all fields to study history because not every individual can be attracted by the idea of knowing the past and the energy spent in history might fail to benefit their future directly.

有人认为，大学所有专业的学生都被要求学习历史也许不可取，因为不是人人都对历史感兴趣，历史学习不一定对于每个专业的学生都有实际的利好.

12. Confronted with the tremendous pressure of academic study , only few students will allocate energies and time to history learning

学习压力大，学生们不愿意学习历史.

解析：allocate to v分配……

解析：allocate time to doing sth = is unwilling to do sth = is reluctant to do sth v不愿意做……

13. One’s interest in history can be cultivated

对于历史学习的兴趣是可以培养的.

14. The mental pleasure and dialectical thinking deriving from history learning could impose a proud influence on one’s future.

通过学习历史获得的精神乐趣，培养的辩证思维对于每个人的未来都是有利好的影响。