一条路，走了很久，没有尽头；一首诗，作了很久，终难完美；一杯水，一块石，折射出无限可能、无限人生：看似放了石头的杯子已经满了，然而沙子和水还可以放进去……这正如我们的人生，看似已经濒于“极限”的事物总会有“惊世”转机和意外收获！
A road, walking for a long time, has no end; a poem, written for a long time, will not be perfect; a glass of water, a stone, reflects the infinite possibility, infinite life: it seems that the glass with the stone is full, but the sand and water can also be put in This is just like our life. Things that seem to be on the verge of "limit" will always have "amazing" turnaround and unexpected harvest!
曾记否，那年小小的你，执拗地甩开父亲的手，爬上自己的“铁马”。你锁眉，你严肃，你满眼执著。终于，你登上“宝座”，用力一蹬，自行车动了。可是你的脚还够不到大大的车蹬啊。下一秒，事情可想而知……父亲急忙挪开压在你身上的车，从摔倒到被扶起一语不发的你笑了，笑着说：“爸爸，我做到了。”也许你摔倒了，但从你执意自己骑车的那一刻起，就注定了你是成功的。因为那一刻，你挑战了自己，超越了自己年龄和身体的极限……
Have you ever remembered that year, you stubbornly threw off your father's hand and climbed onto your "iron horse". You lock your eyebrows, you're serious, you're obsessed. Finally, you step on the throne, push hard, and the bike moves. But your feet can't reach the big pedals. Next second, we can imagine My father quickly moved away from the car on you. You smiled and said, "Dad, I did it." Maybe you fell down, but from the moment you decide to ride your bike, you are doomed to success. Because at that moment, you challenged yourself, beyond your age and physical limits
曾记否，那年你站在小小的舞台上，那样稚拙。涨红的小脸，不自然地向上扬起的嘴角，细密的汗珠，借助你不知所安的眼睛和体侧紧握的双手，一眼就看到你脸上写着：无助。然而，那第一句的清晰歌唱，收尾时的灿烂微笑，表明了你无可争议的胜利爆发，你必将化茧成蝶，炫彩飞舞。因为那一刻，你战胜了自己，解开沉重枷锁，超越了心理极限……
Ever remember, that year you stood on a small stage, so naive. The little red face, the unnatural upward raised corner of the mouth, the fine sweat, with the help of your eyes and hands that you don't know where you are, you can see that your face is written: helpless. However, the clear singing of the first sentence and the brilliant smile at the end show that your indisputable victory will break out, and you will turn into a butterfly and fly in brilliant colors. Because at that moment, you overcome yourself, untie the heavy shackles, and transcend the psychological limit
曾记否，汶川地震158个小时后带给你的惊喜和感动，救援的黄金时间已经过去了八十几个小时，他依然生还，虚弱但不懦弱。在黑暗中，摸索、等待是他生存的重心。然而最苦闷、最绝望的时期，他熬过来了。当第一缕阳光照进那微小的缝隙时，就已宣告了他在这场与死神的拉锯战中胜利了。那一刻，他安全了，胜利了。生命的光辉在他身后光彩夺目，因为那一刻，他也克服了自己的生理和心理的种种困难，走出阴霾，超越了生命的极限……
Did you remember that 158 hours after the Wenchuan earthquake, the golden time for rescue has passed for more than 80 hours, and he is still alive, weak but not cowardly. In the dark, groping and waiting are the focus of his existence. However, he survived the most miserable and desperate period. When the first ray of sunlight shines into the tiny gap, it has declared his victory in the battle with death. At that moment, he was safe and won. The brilliance of life is shining behind him, because at that moment, he also overcame his physiological and psychological difficulties, walked out of the haze, and exceeded the limit of life
曾经，珠穆朗玛峰是不可征服的；曾经，南极极点是不可穿越的；曾经，马里亚纳海沟是下不去的……而今，珠峰上插遍了各国国旗；极点上留下了我们的足迹；海沟里还有我们的残温……这一个个的不可能现在已经变得平常无奇，不经意间我们发现：都是因为“极限”，我们超越了极限，让不可能成为可能。
Once, Everest was invincible; once, the Antarctic pole was invincible; once, the Mariana Trench was invincible Now, the national flags of all countries are planted on Everest; our footprints are left on the poles; there is our residual temperature in the trenches This one by one impossibility has now become commonplace. Inadvertently, we find that it's all because of the "limit". We have exceeded the limit and made the impossibility possible.
蝶的飞舞是因为它超越了茧层的极限；花的芬芳，是因为它超越了苞叶的极限；果的诱人，是因为它突破了青涩的极限……
Butterflies fly because they exceed the limit of cocoon layer, flowers are fragrant because they exceed the limit of bracts, fruits are attractive because they exceed the limit of green
漫漫人生路，我们知道，害怕退却，没有出路；我们也知道，中途抛锚，又要耽误时间；我们更知道，任其飘摇，就有触礁沉没的危险。所以，“超越”是我们的必经之路，唯有越过“极限”的高山，我们才能看到旷世奇景！
Long life, we know, afraid of retreat, no way out; we also know, anchor midway, but also delay time; we know, let it drift, there is a risk of sinking on the rocks. Therefore, "Surpassing" is our only way. Only when we surpass the "extreme" mountains, can we see the wonders of the world!
【名师点评】
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文章用抒情的笔调颂扬无极限的人生。作者运用具有浓郁抒情意味的语言对敢于超越自己的孩子给予了颂扬，对在汶川大地震中超越72小时生命极限顽强坚持到生还的受难者，对征服珠穆朗玛峰、南极、马里亚纳海沟等人类极限的中国人进行颂扬。全文语言感情充沛，激情洋溢。
The article uses lyrical style to praise the limitless life. The author uses lyrical language to praise the children who dare to surpass themselves, the victims who are determined to survive in the Wenchuan earthquake, and the Chinese who conquered the limits of human beings such as Mount Everest, Antarctica and Mariana Trench. The language is full of emotion and passion.
这篇作文是情理相生的散文。从说理这个角度，作者在第一段运用走路、写诗引出作文题目中材料所涉及的话题，提出了无极限的观点。然后以第一次骑自行车的孩子，第一次上舞台的孩子以及地震中超越生命极限顽强坚持的灾民，征服珠峰、南极等的英雄豪杰为事例论证，充分地说明了超越人类极限完全是有可能的。从抒情的角度说，作者在文章前半部分写孩子的事例时采用了第二人称的写法，使文章亲切，富有情感，而全文主要采用排比段的写法，也为增添抒情意味作了很好的蓄势。(李锡琴)
This composition is an essay of mutual affection and reason. From the point of view of reasoning, in the first paragraph, the author uses walking and writing poetry to lead to the topics involved in the materials in the composition, and puts forward the unlimited point of view. Then, taking the children who ride bicycles for the first time, the children who go on stage for the first time, the victims who persist in transcending the limit of life in the earthquake, and the heroes who conquer Everest, Antarctica and other places as examples to demonstrate that it is completely possible to transcend the limit of human beings. From the lyrical point of view, the author used the second person writing method in the first half of the article to write children's cases, which makes the article cordial and full of emotion, while the full text mainly uses the method of arranging paragraphs, which also makes a good preparation for adding lyrical meaning. (Li Xiqin)
